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Karakter

24. maj 2016 af susa240b (Slettet) - Niveau: 8. klasse

Hvad ville i give denne i karakter?

Dear Gran

Hope everything is going well at home? I can’t believe it is a whole month since I last saw you. I am having a fantastic time with Sam and Robin and their family. It is really strange down under. I am sitting here with my I -Pad looking at photos, and videos that I have taken in the zoo park I had visit on my first day, there was a lot of different animals. My favorite animal was the famous seal Linda, she was the funniest animal I never had seen before. I had also been every afternoon on a beach near my hotel for at bath, the water was warm and lovely. And the view was so fantastic and beautiful, there was also many flowers and trees in different colors. And the best, there was a ice cream shop, with many delicious ice, someone with chocolate, and someone with strawberry. I tooked the ice cream with chocolate, it was a good choice. On my home back I saw some kangaroos mit some kids. They was so cute, so I tooked a photo of them. After I had been on the beach I decided to take into the city for shopping. I came so to the city, and I decided to go to the restaurant for keep some dinner, but one my way, guess who i saw. One of my friends Lisa from my class, what a meet. We eat dinner together and talked about all sorts of things. After we had eat, and talked finish, I said goodbye. I carry on and came to a shop with many different, and interesting things. There was everything from pencils to macbooks, and I decided to keep a macbook because it is more cheaply in Australia, than it is in Denmark.  Then I was finished with my shopping I was on my way home, I saw the light from the boats it was so romantic. When I came home I saw my hotel room, clean and perfect. My hotel room has the character five. And Gran you now I will have the best, so it is not some new news.

The last days on Australia I took a trip in a big wood with my best friends Sam and Robin, it was a dangerous trip mit snakes, so we must take care of each other. But we survived.  

I will finish my letter, with my interesting thought about Australia. I will say at my best adventure, and experience are definite the trip in the zoo, and the beautiful beach. But also the trip in the wood, because it was so challenging. And I will never forget my unforgettable trip.


By Susanne Ariellesen    


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Svar #1
24. maj 2016 af Skaljeglavedinelektier

Jeg kan ikke give dig en karakter, men der er en hel del grammatiske fejl. 


Svar #2
24. maj 2016 af susa240b (Slettet)

Du har ike kunnet læse den på 3 min.Du har bare sagt at der er masse fejl

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Svar #3
24. maj 2016 af Carolinepcm (Slettet)

Jeg ville nok sige et 7-tal, der er ret mange grammatiske fejl


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Svar #4
24. maj 2016 af aresiio (Slettet)

Jeg vil nok også mene 7.


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Svar #5
24. maj 2016 af JulieW99

Jeg vil mene 4. Den er for direkte oversat til engelsk, og der er en del grammatiske fejl i. I 7/8 klasse, var jeg ikke sluppet af sted med 7 for den stil der.

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Vh Julie


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Svar #6
24. maj 2016 af sjls

Ville nok sige 4-7, da der som sagt af de andre er en del fejl, og den er meget direkte oversat. Nok nærmere 4, men jeg ved jo ikke, hvordan din lærer giver karakterer... Hvis han/hun er MEGET flink, kan du måske godt få 7.


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Svar #7
24. maj 2016 af Skaljeglavedinelektier

#2 jeg behøver ikke læse det hele for at kunne se, at der er mange fejl. Jeg valgte at skimme teksten og fandt mange fejl, hvad de fleste andre også gjorde. 


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Svar #8
24. maj 2016 af Pyrros

02 eller 4. Omkring 50 fejl fordelt på 450 ord? Der er knap nok en sætning uden en fejl, og det er ikke godt nok, i hvert fald ikke når du kommer op i niende.


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