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Teknologi

09. december 2006 af o1-MK (Slettet)
Hejsa derude. Jeg håber virkelig på at en af jer dejlige mennesker, der ser mit indlæg vil rette min oversættelse, da jeg er lost når det gælder engelsk.

HER ER DET JEG HAR OVERSAT OG LÆNGERE NEDE ER DEN DANSKE VERSION PLACERET:

El, TV, radio, telephone and cars are some of the thing the nowadays old generations has experienced the development of. But us young people look on it as a matter of course and a part of our weekday which we can’t imagine to live without. The number of the technologic things which we look on as a matter of course of the weekday are still growing.
One of the things we use and is going to be a normally thing in people’s everyday is the computer-technology. Today I’m using many hours to work with the computer. Not only to entertainment but on schoolwork too and other serious exercises.
Among other things I have invested a CD-rom drive which adds a vast number of options to the computer. Extra harddisk, colour printer and much more. With help from these extensions I can make my mathematic and linguistic school exercises, animations, tekst with different illustrations and quickly make notice in various dictionaries and lexicon. Everything has been a big help in my schoolwork. Another very relevant thing in the computer world is internet. It’s a big international network you connect to your computer. Via the internet you can send an e-mail instead of a letter to ex. USA with the post-office authorities. And then you get an answer after very short time. This is not only an advantage to big international firms, but the private too.
I think the computer-technology is exciting and there are nearly no limits to what it can be used to. It will in many way change people’s weekday. Already today there are possibility to sit at home and order wares at the grocer’s via the computer.
What the consequences of this will be, I don’t know but I think that it’s very exciting in many cases. But… it will change the life much more than you can imagine.


DEN DANSKE:


El, fjernsyn, telefon og biler er nogle af de ting, som nutidens ældre generationer har oplevet udviklingen af. Men vi unge betragter det som en selvfølge og en del af vores hverdag som vi ikke kan forestille os uden. Antallet af de teknologiske ting, som i dag betragtes som en selvfølge i hverdagen, er stadig stigende. En af de ting som vi bruger og som har været på vej til at blive en almindelig ting i folks dagligdag, er computer-teknologien. I dag bruger jeg mange timer på at arbejde med computer, ikke kun til underholdning, men også skolearbejde og andre seriøse opgaver.
Bl.a. har jeg investeret i et CD-rom drev, hvilket tilføjer et utal muligheder til computeren. Ekstra harddisk, farveprinter og meget mere. Ved hjælp af disse udvidelser er jeg nu i stand til at lave mine matematiske og sproglige skoleopgaver, tekst med forskellige illustrationer, animationer og hurtigt at lave opslag i diverse ordbøger og leksika, alt sammen har været et stort hjælp til mit skolearbejde.
En anden meget aktuel ting inden for computerverdenen er Internet. Det er et stort internationalt netværk, som man kan koble sin computer på. Via Internettet kan man sende en e-mail i stedet for at sende et brev til f.eks. U.S.A., med postvæsenet. Og man kan få et svar inden for meget kort tid. Dette er ikke kun en fordel for store internationale firmaer, men det kan også benyttes af private.
Jeg synes computer teknologien er spændende, og der er næsten ingen grænser for, hvad den kan bruges til. Den vil også på mange måder kunne ændre folks hverdag, allerede i dag er mulighed for at sidde hjemme og bestille varer hos købmanden via computeren.
Hvad konsekvenser af dette vil bliver på længere sigt, ved jeg ikke, men jeg synes i mange tilfælde at det er spændende. Men det vil forandre livet meget mere, end man forestiller sig.



MANGE HILSENER...

Brugbart svar (2)

Svar #1
09. december 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Jeg har kigget lidt på det. Bemærk jeg har kun kigget på den engelsk tekst, da det er for uoverskueligt at se begge mens der rettes. Her er mine bud til nogle ændringer, så kan du rette dem du er enige i.

El(ectricity), TV(s), radio(s), telephone(s) and cars are some of the thing(s) the /nowadays/(present) /old/(elderly) generations ha/s/(ve) experienced the development of.

But us young(er) people look on it as a matter of course and a part of our weekday which we can/’/(no)t imagine /to live/(living) without. The number of the technologic(al) things which we look on as a matter of course /of/(in) the weekday are still growing.

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Among other things(,) I have invested (in) a CD-rom drive which adds a vast number of options to the computer. Extra hard( )disk, colour printer and much more.

With help from these extensions(,) I can make my mathematic and linguistic school exercises, animations, /tekst/(text) with different illustrations and quickly make notice in various dictionaries and lexicon(s).

Everything has been a big help /in/(on) my schoolwork. Another very relevant thing in the computer world is (the) /i/(I)nternet. It/’s/ (is) a /big/(large) international network you connect to your computer. Via the /i/(I()nternet(,) you can send an e-mail instead of a letter to /ex./(e.g.) (the) USA with the post-office authorities.

And /then/(when) you (will) /get/(receive) an answer /after very short time/(shortly afterwards). This is not only an advantage /to/(for) big international firms, but (for) the private /too/(as well).

I think the computer-technology is exciting and there are nearly no limits /to/(in) what it can be used to. /It will i/(I)n many way(s,) (it will) change people’s weekday. Already today there /are/(is) (the) possibility to sit at (your) home and order wares at the grocer’s via the computer.

What the consequences of this will be, I do/n’t/ (not) know(,) but I think that it/’s/ (is) very exciting /in many cases/(in every possible way). But… it /will/(is going to) change /the/(our) li/f/(v)e(s) much more than you can imagine.

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Svar #2
09. december 2006 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Første linjes rettelser skyldes i øvrigt, at der findes "logisk" flertal på engelsk. For at første linje skal være 100% korrekt, er der også nød til at være komma mellem 'telephones' og and. (i.e. engelsk opremsningskomma)

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