Rettelse af oversættelse

Actually, as a foreigner with English at a very high level as my mother tongue, I would suggest that the English version goes like this:

Denmark - seen from the outside

Our starting point is that, as a rule, when foreigners who have lived here speak of Denmark they have only good things to say about our beautiful land, our well-organized society and, not the least, the happy and friendly Danish people. One hears though, also, criticism and this appears to be happening more and more often. Here are a few examples from the last year:
"It is at least, in part, that Danes are totally materialistic, which is something that tends to make people lonely and afraid of each other. It is cold here, and I am not speaking about the weather." This impression of us is clearly shared by others. For example, an Australian married to a Dane said "I learned quickly that there is a golden rule in Denmark that controls all others which is, essentially, one must watch our for themselves (because no one else is going to offer help)". 

I know it is too late to be useful, but I wanted to clarify in case anyone else sees this.

Sorry - this was somehow dropped while I was working on the rest of the translation: 
Dansk:
”Jeg er efterhånden blevet klar over at jeg ikke hører hjemme her,” siger en ung afrikaner, der i 10 år har opholdt sig i landet.
Engelsk:
"In retrospect it is clear that I do not belong here", says a young African who, for ten years, has lived in Denmark. 

Hmm, -this English rendering is not quite to the point.

Denmark -  as seen (from the) by an outsider

(Our starting point is that, as a rule, when) We usually take it for granted that foreigners (who have lived here speak) when commenting on (of) Denmark (they) only have (only good things to say) words of praise (about) for our beautiful (land) country, our well-organized society and, (not the)last, but not least, the happy and friendly Danish people. (One hears though, also,) Still, one also encounters some criticism and this (appears to be happening) occurs more and more often these days. Here are a few examples from (the) last year:

'I have learnt that I do not really belong here', says a young African, ten years a resident in this country. It's to do with Danes being rather materialist by nature. This makes most  people lonely and frightened of one another. This is a cold climate, -and I'm not just talking of the physical climate. People from other parts seem to share this opinion. One Australian, married to a Dane, said, 'I was quickly shown that there's an important lesson one had better learn: 'Mind your own business.' 
("It is at least, in part, that Danes are totally materialistic, which is something that tends to make people lonely and afraid of each other. It is cold here, and I am not speaking about the weather.") This impression of us is clearly shared by others. For example, an Australian married to a Dane said "I learned quickly that there is a golden rule in Denmark that controls all others which is, essentially, one must watch our for themselves (because no one else is going to offer help)".