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retning
Hejsa, hvis der ville være nogle der vil rette det her enden imorgen vil det være super!:-)
Dear Mr. Wonka
My name is Kristine, and I am 14 years old.
I am writing to you, because I've got the great idea, to make a new healthy bar - coated with white chocolate with delicious fruit flavors inside.
I will just explain to you about it:
It's called “the world full of surprises” and its look like a chocolate bar, but inside it’s a healthy fruit bar.
When you take a bite, you can see the colors inside - green, red, yellow and pink, its look like a rainbow.
It is coated with white chocolate, which of course is healthy.
And inside the fruit bar there are 4 tastes, first of all, there is the apple flavor, so strawberry, so mango and in the end, raspberries flavor.
The reason you should start to produce my fruit bar is:
Its look like a chocolate bar, but inside it’s a healthy fruit bar.
It is much healthier than a chocolate bar.
And it taste like candy but it is´t
Svar #1
23. juni 2014 af maxrimmer (Slettet)
because I've got this great idea
it look like a rainbow.
it look like a chocolate bar
And it taste like candy but it isn´t
Jeg kan ikke garantere at mine rettelser er korrekte ;)
Svar #2
23. juni 2014 af Andersen11 (Slettet)
its looks like a chocolate bar
its looks like a rainbow
there is the apple flavor, so then strawberry, so then mango and in the end, raspberryies flavor
Its looks like a chocolate bar
And it tastes like candy but it isn´t
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