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23. juni 2014 af 7klasse - Niveau: 7. klasse

Hejsa, hvis der ville være nogle der vil rette det her enden imorgen vil det være super!:-)

Dear Mr. Wonka

My name is Kristine, and I am 14 years old.

I am writing to you, because I've got the great idea, to make a new healthy bar - coated with white chocolate with delicious fruit flavors inside.

I will just explain to you about it:

It's called “the world full of surprises” and its look like a chocolate bar, but inside it’s a healthy fruit bar.

When you take a bite, you can see the colors inside - green, red, yellow and pink, its look like a rainbow.

It is coated with white chocolate, which of course is healthy.

And inside the fruit bar there are 4 tastes, first of all, there is the apple flavor, so strawberry, so mango and in the end, raspberries flavor.

The reason you should start to produce my fruit bar is:

Its look like a chocolate bar, but inside it’s a healthy fruit bar.
It is much healthier than a chocolate bar.
And it taste like candy but it is´t


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Svar #1
23. juni 2014 af maxrimmer (Slettet)

 because I've got this great idea

it look like a rainbow.

it look like a chocolate bar

And it taste like candy but it isn´t

Jeg kan ikke garantere at mine rettelser er korrekte ;)


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Svar #2
23. juni 2014 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

its looks like a chocolate bar

its looks like a rainbow

there is the apple flavor, so then strawberry, so then mango and in the end, raspberryies flavor

Its looks like a chocolate bar

And it tastes like candy but it isn´t


Svar #3
23. juni 2014 af 7klasse

Mange tak!

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