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For over 80 år siden trådte alkoholforbuddet I USA I kraft. Det var forbudt at sælge og servere drikkevarer, der havde et alcohol indhold på mere end 0,5%. Tideligere har det været opfattelsen, at religiøse grupper med indflydelse på lovgierne stod bag forbuddet, de såkaldte puritanere, men i dag ved vi, at feminister og socialt indstillede politikere også var tilhængere. Siden begyndelsen af 1800 tallet var debatten verseret i landet, og den kulminerede altså med forbuddet i 1920. Det blev imidlertid en fiasko, for det var altid let at finde spiritus, og forbuddet var årsag til en opblomstring af den organiserede kriminalitet over hele landet. 5. december 1933 blev forbuddet ophævet efter at flere kendte afholdsmænd ændrede mening og overtalte kongressen til ændringen. Det er interessant at bemærke, at i forbindelse med forbuddet faldt antallet af følgesygedomme i forbindelse med indtagelse af alkohol voldsomt, og det var ikke før 1975 at forbruget af alkohol nåede niveauer fra forbuddet.

I dag ser de amerikanske studerendes drikkevarer således ud: 43% af alle studerende drikker fire til fem drinks efter hinanden. Hvert år må 159.000 førsteårsstuderende opgive deres studier på grund af druk. I gennemsnit bruger en studerende omkring $1000 om året på at drikke. 96% af alle amerikanere er bekymrede for druk blandt unge under 21 år. Derfor søsatte 113 universiteter i år 2000 en reklamekampagne med helsideannoncer for at få nedsat de studerendes forbrug. De studerende har midlertidigt ikke deres vaner fra fremmede; da deres forældre gik på universitetet i 1970’erne var det ikke særsyn at lærerne tog en øl med til deres studenter som de så kunne drikke under forelæsningerne.

For over 80 years ago entered the alcohol ban/prohibit in USA. It was forbidden to sell and serve Alcohol who had an alcohol substance for over 0,5 percent. Later it has been the idea that the religious groups with influence on the law stood behind the ban, but today we know that the feminist and socially minded politicks was supporters to. Since the beginning of the 1800s was the debate pending in the country, the ban was processing in the 1920s. A mean while it was become a failure, it was always easy to find spirits and the ban has become the reason to efflorescence’s of the hard criminal over the whole country.  The 5 December 1933s was the ban repealed after several known abstainers changed their meanings and persuaded the congress to change. It’s interesting to note that the connection with the ban forbidden that the number of diseases fall in the connection with the intake of alcohol and it was dramatically.                                                                       Today the Americans students beverage looks like this: 43% of every students drink four to five drinks after each other.  Every year may 159.000 freshman’s give up their studies because of their drinking abstains. I average a student use about 1000 dollars a year for drinking. 96 persent of every Americans was worried about the drinking problem between young people under 21. In year of 2000 made 113 universities’ advertising Campaign with full page advertisements to reduce the student’s consumptions. The student has not their abstainers from strangers; it was a normal thing when their parents went on the university in 1970s that their teachers took a beer to their students, who they could drink under the lectures.