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Hjælp til rettelse?

27. august 2014 af SNBryce - Niveau: 10. klasse

Hej,

Jeg er ved at skrive et brev... men synes hugtigt man får stirret sig blind på fejlene! Nogen der vil hjælpe? TAK :)

After staring at the paper for many hours, I finally figured out, what to respond with.  I must say, I was really surprised to hear from you after all this time. It has been so long, and I wish I could tell you, how much I have been missing you, and how I hope we can meet up for a great chat about the years that ha past, but that is not the case. I don’t want to take a trip down memory-lane and talk about all the bad that have happened. I moved on, and I need for you to do the same. You deserve to be happy, and I truly believe that we are better off without each other.

But, Mother, I need you to know that I am okay! I have a good paying job, a big house and most things you can dream of. But what I appreciate the most is my incredible wife and the most beautiful little daughter in world. I’ve got it all, but I am sure you already know about that. I grew up to be the son you have always dreamed of, you should be proud. 


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Svar #1
28. august 2014 af Stygotius

"Hjælpe" med hvad ??


Svar #2
28. august 2014 af SNBryce

At finde fejl jeg kunne have overset :) gamma, stavefejl osv....

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Svar #3
28. august 2014 af Stygotius

-fede typer = fejl

På engelsk har man normalt intet komma foran en bisætning.

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After staring at the paper for many hours, I finally figured out(, what) how to respond (with).  I must say, I was really surprised to hear from you after all this time. It has been so long, and I wish I could tell you, how much I have been missing you, and how I hope we can meet up for a great chat about the years that ha past, but that is not the case. I don’t want to take a trip down memory-lane and talk about all the bad that have happened. I moved on, and I need  for  you to do the same. You deserve to be happy, and I truly believe that we are better off without each other.

But, Mother, I need you to know that I am okay! I have a good paying job, a big house and most things you can dream of. But what I appreciate the most is my incredible wife and the most beautiful little daughter in xxx world. I’ve got it all, but I am sure you already know about that. I grew up to be the son you have always dreamed of, you should be proud. 


Svar #4
29. august 2014 af SNBryce

Nåå nej selvfølgelig ikke :) tak!

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