Engelsk Stil. Ret igennem?

What is a hero? Who are the people we make heroes? Why do we need heroes? That's the question we all ask for. It don't have to be a man with superpowers but a person who a willing  to do such thing, like sacrifices they're one life for another person that's in danger. There is thousands of ordinay people around the world that makes a different every single day. 
Now truth to be told, we all want to be heroes in some kind of way. We all want to make that difference in that moment of time that will dramatically impact the situation. To keep someone safe. And to keep other people safe. Stand up for what is right and justice. 
My hero is my parents. They kinda saved my life, and gave me a home. 
Before all that. Before the 14 years, I lived in a orphanage with other children's and needed a family who would take care of me. And that's when I I think they deserve the title ''Hero'' Because they kinda gave me a shelter. They gave me food, a bed and love in 14 years. I love them with all my heart, and I don't know what I would do without them.
What have we learned so far? There are different types of heroes. Heroes that, by example show us that anything is possible. Heroes that by their decisions, demonstrate a courage that is not common in the average populace and we see a hero that finds strength to overcome adversity and thrive. We have seen heroes that connect and unify when their unification is needed to stop or to mitigate the amount of death and destruction.

Det ville være en stor hjælp hvis i gad at rette min stil (Dog skal der være lidt mere, men bare som min start/plot.) Selve stilen skal handle om hvad en helt består af, og hvorfor man har valgt den helt. Tusinde tak!