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21. marts 2015 af Michumichu (Slettet) - Niveau: A-niveau

Hej denne oversættelse driller lidt, ville sætte pris på noget hjælp :)

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Vi ved ikke meget om Shakespeares liv. Han kommer fra den lille provinsby Stratford, som ligger ved Avon. Faderen var håndværker, og han var medlem af byrådet; i tre år var han også borgmester. Shakespeare har sikkert gået i Stratford Grammar Scholl, som stadig kan ses i byen, men vi ved ikke meget om, hvad han lærte i skolen. 
I 1582, da han var 18 år gammel, giftede han sig med Ann Hathaway, som var 7-8 år ældre; hun var ældste datter af en velstående landmand. Deres første barn blev født året efter, kun seks måneder efter brylluppet; senere fik de også tvillinger. Der er flere forklaringer på, hvorfor Shakespeare rejste til London, men de fleste forklaringer er anekdoter fra senere tid. Nogle forskere mener, at han blev medlem af et teaterselskab, der var på besøg i Stratford. 
Første gang, vi hører om ham igen, er i 1592, og på det tidspunkt er han en kendt person i London. Han er mest kendt som skuespiller og som skuespilforfatter, men han var også ejer af Globe Teatret. 

Min oversættelse

We do not know much about Shakespeare’s life. He comes from the small provincial town called Stratford, which lies on Avon. His father was a wright, a member of the town council and for three years he was mayor as well. Shakespeare has probably gone to the Stratford Grammar School, which can still be seen in the town, but we do not know much about what he learned at the school.  

In 1582,when he was 18 years old, he married Ann Hathaway who was 7-8 years older; she was the eldest daughter of a wealthy farmer. Their first child was born the following year only six months after the wedding. Later on they had twins as well. There are several explanations to why Shakespeare went to London, but most of the explanations are anecdotes from a later time. Some research workers believe that he became a member of a theatre company, which visited Stratford.

  The first time we hear about him again is in 1592, and at that time he is a well-known person in London. He is mostly known as an actor and as a play writer, but he was also the owner of the Globe Theatre.

På forhånd tak :)


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Svar #1
21. marts 2015 af Stygotius

Du har intet sagt om hvad dit problem er.


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24. marts 2015 af bulgarianrose (Slettet)

Jeg har lige kigget det igennem og spottet nogle små fejl, men det havde hjulpet hvis du havde nævnt nogle specifikke ting, man skulle kigge på. Du har desuden en del problemer med kommateringen, men eftersom jeg heller ikke har fuldstændig styr på reglerne, har jeg holdt mig fra at rette noget. Men overordnet ser det fint ud.

Jeg håber ellers ikke svaret kom for sent. :)

We do not know much about Shakespeare’s life. He comes from the small provincial town called Stratford, which lies on Avon [Jeg synes det lyder lidt underligt; måske er det bedre med fx "which is located by the river Avon"? Det er længere, men jeg vil mene det er mere tydeligt og naturligt.]. His father was a wright ["craftsman" er er bedre i denne sammenhæng; "wright" er forædlet og passer ikke ift. det sproglige niveau i den øvrige tekst], a member of the town council and for three years he was mayor as well. Shakespeare has probably gone [probably went] to the Stratford Grammar School, which can still be seen in the town, but we do not know much about what he learned at the school.  

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  The first time we hear about him again is in 1592, and at that time he is a well-known person in London. He is mostly known as an actor and as a play writer [det hedder "playwright"], but he was also the owner of the Globe Theatre.


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24. marts 2015 af Stygotius

1 He comes from the small provincial town called Stratford upon Avon

2  He is was  mostly best known as an actor 

3  His father was a member of the town council town councillor

God kommentar af bulgarianrose !!


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