Engelsk rettelse

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Once upon time…..there was a seagull named Simon, who lived in a city called Shropshire. Simon was bored all the time, he didn’t know what he should do daily. He pushed himself learning how to fly properly. Finally Simon seagull learned how to fly, and he started flying with flights, and he always liked it. Simon was good friends with the superhero, Charwoman. She had the special ability to melt things with her warm, and she also could fly. Simon always thinks of her like a superwoman. Simon and Superwoman had one thing in common, and that was the fact that they do not like the blancmange tennis player, named Philia and she was pure evil. When Simon and Superwoman heard her banshee scream, they knew that she was up to something. Philia had the ability to shoot with tennis balls. She have them inside of her, and loved to shoot others with them. Philia hated the fact that she could not fly. So she was always envious when she saw Simon and Superwoman flying with the flights. One day Philia came up with a plan, where her intention was to shoot Simon, Superwoman and the flights they were flying with, with the tennis balls. Finally Philia got the chance to shoot them, but she did not hit Simon and Superwoman. Instead she hit the two flights, which fell down and set fire in Shropshire. Simon and Superwoman now had the task to save the town, Shropshire. Philia still continued to shoot the flights and there came more fire. It was very difficult for Simon and Superwoman to douse the fire. They thought that they were all going to die, and there was only one person who would knew if they all were going to die, The Bridge of Death. Simon and Superwoman went to The Bridge of Death. They asked him if they were going to die. The Bridge of Death said yes they were all going to die. Simon and Superwoman was really sad to hear that. But The Bridge of Death said that Shropshire could be saved if they got rid of Philia. Simon and Superwoman did not know how to get rid of her, because she was so powerful. The Bridge of Death gave them a white oak stake. He said that the white oak stake is the only thing that could kill Philia. They need to put the stake straight to her heart or she would not die, but the white oak stake can only be used once. Simon and Superwoman had the task to kill Philia and save the town, Shropshire.

They did it! They killed Philia, saved Shropshire and they lived happily ever after.