Stil rettelse for fejl

Hej, jeg har skrevet denne stil men er ikke selv så god til at se mine fejl både stavefejl og grammatiske fejl.

It had been a rough weak, but now it was finally Friday, I woke up 7. Am. 

Then I ate some breakfast, and drived to work.

At the office where only me and my assistant, the rest of the team were on summer holiday.

The day went well and I sold a lot of toys to the supermarkets.

Then did the clock hit four o'clock and the work day were passed, actual the days before summer holiday were passed.

I droved home and ordered some Pizza. Some of my friends had invited me to a party, so I decided to take to the party, we just had fun and drank some alcohol, later on the night I saw a beautiful women, and I decided to buy a drink for her, then did we decrease in talk and she told me that she were 26 years old, she was moved to England for 7 years ago and she was studying jurisprudence, later I left the party whit out her.

Next morning I woke up whit hangover, then I ordered some junk food and waited until the food would arrive, then did I checked my Facebook account, then could I see that I got a new Facebook friend invite, and that was the girl I met to the party, then did I accepted the invite, and send her a message about she would like to go on a date.

Later on they day did she replied that she would love to go on a date, we planed to met on Roosterville Restaurante, and I just had a amazing date, then asked I her about we should come together she said yes.

A mount later did we move together and lived together for a year.

Once a day I had planned to surprise her so I had buyed a ring for her, so I surprised her and asked her about she would marry me, then she said yes, and now it was the day when we got married.