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ABSTRACT

19. december 2007 af natalie-bg (Slettet)

dette er et mindre udkast til mit abstract - det er endnu ikke færdig endnu, men jeg ville lige høre, om der var nogen, der umiddelbart kunne se nogle gramatiske fejl eller kommafejl, da jeg ikke er så godt til dette i engelsk (:

The apartheid system has affected many native-born South Africans but also Asians, coloured and whites at that. In the first half of the twentieth century Africans lived with the strictly segregation politics which Alfred Milner had established. Later on, the Nationalist party won the selection in 1948 by using the native population of South Africa as a barrier for England to continue their supremacy. The apartheid system was born with the ulterior motive to get the white population to fear. In the fiftieths, a torrent of laws between whites and natives where created. No longer could a white man marry a black girl. No longer could black people sit wherever they wanted to.

In the light of the analytically work with the historical aspect of the apartheid system one must be curious to know; How where these peoples life? What especially marked their everyday life? Nadime Gordimer, who is a white citizen of South African, is the writer of many novels and short stories that contains the essence of the relationship between the many nationalities in South Africa during the time of apartheid.
In “County Lover”, “Blinder” and “Good Climate, Friendly Inhabitants” the everyday life of apartheid is illustrated. In “County Lovers”, one gets the feeling of the difficulty of having a relationship across the races because of the sex laws, which forbid natives and whites to have any kind of relationship with each other. In “Blinder”, Gordimer wants the reader to focus on a miserable Woman who has a drinking problem. She wants the reader to realize which difficulties these kind of women to through.

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Svar #1
19. december 2007 af Siiiiine (Slettet)

"won the elections"
The apartheid system was "born", måske "was made having the ulterior motive..."
"..and natives WERE created"
"whereever the wanted", uden "to".
"the analytical work", det er ikke et adverbium
"how were these people's..." - "where" = hvor
"South Africa", african betegner en person, som er afrikaner
"that contain", uden s, da det er flertal.
"go through"

håber du ku bruge det til noget :)

Svar #2
19. december 2007 af natalie-bg (Slettet)

Tusind tak for feedback ! ja, det kune jeg bruge til noget (:
opdagede også et par andre fejl endda.

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