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Dear Editor

Not all of us can have it all our way, some are happy with what they have, while others live under very poor and bad circumstances and are, therefore, not given the opportunity to enjoy life.

Your article, 'I Can See, Mommy': Witness The Moment Two Blind Sisters See The World For First Time written by Dominique Mosbergen, 09/08/2014 in The Huffington Post, tells an impressive story that really gives one perspective on the things that we take for granted.

We can complain about all kinds of things even the smallest kind of discomfort every now and then. Therefore, it is incredible to read about the two Indian girls, Sonia and Anita, who never spend any time of their life complaining. Sonia and Anita were both born blind, the two girls just wanted a normal life and all they wished for was to be able to see the world.

A simple surgery, which costs about $300, could have cured Sonia and Anita’s eyes, but it seemed impossible since their parents could never have afforded it. They were given the chance to have the surgery through 20/20/20, a nonprofit organization, who paid all of their medical expenses.

Now the girls can start a normal life and live it the fullest without carrying any burdens. The newspapers should publish more news that are enriching like this one rather than news about the new iPhone.