Engelsk stil - grammatik

Hej, er da' muligvis nogen klogshoveder, der kan tjekke mit grammatik igennem, har stærkt brug for hjælp, nu hvor denne her stil tæller en del, til mit næste karakterbog, håber at i kan hjælpe med at rette den igennem, nu hvor jeg har gjort mit bedste på at prøve, tak på forhånd.

2. Time capsule

I think it could be funny, to write about time capsule, to chose few object, and put it into a time capsule, who know, how the future it’s going to be, and the people, who’s going to find it, and see how it was in our time, accely, i don’t know, what i am going to put in it, just some random stuff, that could be useful in the future.

Dear friends, you guys had found my time capsule, I hope you are enjoying it.

First thing of all, wine, I thing it’s impotent to put something, the can hold in so long time, and people form the further can taste how the wine, was, in out time, maybe bad? Or good, who know,. Right now in the world, we are finding a lot of wine, in the past, very old, but still good, so i think, I’m going to the same thing, it sound crazy, but why not.

My computer, The technology is updardeing every day, keep my computer in like 250 years, and you can see the change, people are laugh, that we use that kind of technology today, like we did for over 10 years old technology, but yes of cause, we are leaning new things everyday, so people everyday, can build a new software and things like that, and showing them, the best kind of computer our time.    

My self phone, here in Denmark (2011), a lot of us, most of the people is teenager, using self phone every day, about it’s at home in school, every where, it’s a good idea to show, that we young people, just had to use the self phone all the time, and I don’t how the future going to look, maybe it’s changing when we are talking about the teenager, who know what teenager are going to use in the further, but a good lesion, to show them that we use our self phone all the time, to updating our facebook, message with our friends, talk with them, and yea, that’s a good example. 

Comedy movie, to re-remembering, what was funny to wrath in our time, like the movie ‘jackass’, to see and showing, what people liked to see, like such a ‘evil’ comedy movie, the are doing, very dangers stunt, and just showing what people could do, just to make another people to laugh, and showing that teenager want to pay to wrathing movies like theirs in cinema, it’s maybe ‘stupidness’ in the further, but we still know, we are not living in the perfect world, as we know. 

Music, the music changing all the time, before we liked to hear, disko music, and it still changing, people need to know, what people liked to listen to in our time, before we know it, in 20 years, the are something ‘new’ and more fresh music, young people want to listen to, and of cause, my taste of music has been changing all the time, in 250 years, I don’t know if the want to listen to music like we do today, or just don’t listing to music, I guess.

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