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Kig den lige igennem igen, kig på tiden eks. "we learn" skulle have været "we learned"

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Er uenig. Learn er bedre.

Ligesom man ville sige: In the video we see how... 

Artiklen eksisterer jo stadig.

In the article “The perils of Binge Drinking,” by Anne Mullens, we learn that Binge Drinking in Canada is a big problem and that it has some bad effects on young people at the age of 15-25. It is because the brain is still developing and it could hurt the brain progress.  Binge drinking for a man is if, you consume 5 drinks, and if you are a woman, 4 drinks. Some analysis states that children start drinking at the age of 13 or even younger. Further analysis states that almost 83% of a whole 12 grade class drink. And 45% have had an episode of binge drinking.
More analysis regarding universities stat that almost half of the student have had a period of binge drinking. Mullens main’s point describes how dangerous alcohol can be when you overuse it. 
It is not only those who drink alcohol who gets the consequences but those that supply and serve alcohol to those who are already harmed by alcohol, the person who serves alcohol to one that dies or gets effected badly from it, can get sued, so it is also about liability.

Hopefully we will realize that although alcohol is pleasant it can also be very dangerous and we need to accept the laws the state has providing us.


Denne er rettet med komma og punktum osv..

Hov, beklager! du har fuldkommen ret.
 Der var jeg lidt for hurtig med et svar, jeg havde ikke lige set substantivet

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Hov, beklager! du har fuldkommen ret.
 Der var jeg lidt for hurtig med et svar, jeg havde ikke lige set substantivet


Det helt iorden, men personlig mening syntes du et summary burde sådan her ud?

Et "summary" hjæper læseren til hurtigt at forstå tekstens budskab.  Når min lærer stiller en opgave med summary eller lign. sørger jeg altid for at få det gjort klart om det skal være omfattende, eller let beskrivende - hvor mange sider der forventes. Lærens svar plejer at være at du selv skal udlede de informationer du synes er vigtig i teksten. Når den så skal rettes igennem (evt. foran klassen) skal du kunne forsvare det du valgte at udlede.

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Mit forslag:

In the article “The (p)Perils of Binge Drinking,” by Anne Mullens, we learn that Binge Drinking in Canada is a big problem and that it has some bad effects on young people at the age of 15-25. It is because the brain is still developing and it could (hurt) impede the (brain) progress.  Binge drinking for a man (is if, you) to consume (5) five drinks, and (if you are) for a woman four (4 drinks). Some (analysis) analyses  (states) state that children start drinking at the age of 13 or even (younger) earlier. (Further analysis) Other analyses (states) show that almost 83(%) per cent of a whole 12 grade class??? drink. (And) 45(%) per cent have had an episode of binge drinking.
More analysis regarding universities stat that almost half of the student have (had a period of binge drinking) been through a drinkin bout. Mullens main’s point??? describes how dangerous alcohol can be (when you overuse it) if you go to extremes. 
(It is not only those who drink alcohol who gets) Not only drinkers will suffer the consequences but those that supply and serve alcohol to (those who are already harmed by alcohol, the person who serves alcohol to one) heavy drinkers (that dies or gets effected badly from it,) who subsequently die from its effects (can get sued) may have to face prosecution.(, so it is also about liability.) It's all a question of acting in a responsible way.

Hopefully we (will realize) shall all realise that although alcohol is pleasant it can also be very dangerous and we (need to accept the laws the state has providing us) must all abide by the law laid down by the government..

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Mit forslag:

In the article “The (p)Perils of Binge Drinking,” by Anne Mullens(,) we learn that Binge Drinking in Canada is a big problem and that it has some bad effects on young people at the age of 15-25. It is because the brain is still developing and (it could hurt  the brain) drinking may slow down the process. .  Binge drinking is for a man (is if, you) to consume (5) five drinks, and (if you are) for a woman four (4 drinks). Some (analysis) analyses (states) state that children start drinking at the age of 13 or even (younger) earlier. (Further analysis) Other analyses (states) have shown that almost 83(%) per cent of a whole 12 grade class??? drink. (And) 45(%) per cent have (had an episode of binge drinking) been on the occasional binge.
More (analysis regarding) analyses carried on in universities state that almost half of the student have (had a period of binge drinking) been on the binge. Mullens main’s point??? (describes) is (how) that (dangerous) consumption of alcohol to excess can be very dangerous(when you overuse it) . 
(It is not only those who drink alcohol who gets) Not only drinkers will suffer (the) consequences but those that supply and serve alcohol to (those who are already harmed by alcohol, the person who serves alcohol to one) heavy drinkers (that dies or gets effected badly from it,) who subsequently die from its effects (can get sued) are guilty of an offence and may have to face prosecution.(, so it is also about liability.) It's all a question of acting in a responsible way.

Hopefully we (will realize)  will all realise that although alcohol is pleasant it can also be very dangerous and (we need to accept the laws the state has providing us) everybody must  abide by the laws for buying and consuming alcohol laid down by the government.