"By the Water of Babylon" Characterization

Heya peops! Jeg skal skrive en personkarakteristik af hovedpersonen i novellen "By the Waters of Babylon". Er der nogen, der vil læse teksten igennem og give mig respons på den som en personkarakteristik. Der skal ikke rettes fejl eller noget, jeg vil bare gerne vide, om det er sådan, man skriver en personkarakteristik!

På forhånd tak! - Birgitte

The main character of the short story “By the Waters of Babylon” is John, the son of a priest and a part of the Hill people.
When John was very young, he was destined to become a priest like his father, which made an impact on his upbringing; he gets the warm corner by the fire and the good piece of meat, but he’s also punished more strictly than his brothers. John was taught chants and spells as a part of his education, and he loves the knowledge he gets. He hungers for the knowledge, and he is very curious. In particular John is very interested in the past and longs to know more about it. John is very supersticious and he’s also very fascinated by the gods and especially the magic, they were able to perform. He stands in true awe of them.