Essay - My Son the Fanatic

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Characterization of Parvez

Parvez grew up in Pakistan, and he now works as a taxi-driver in London. Even though he is not originally from the country, he loves England and is adapted to the Western culture. He tries hard to fit in, and to create a healthy environment for his son – probably not for his wife, since he takes night shifts to avoid his wife, but also to make more money. He also befriends a prostitute named Bettina. His relationship to Bettina is more like a real relationship compared to the relationship with his wife this is indicated from the following quotation: “He could talk to her about things he’d never been able to discuss with his own wife”. He works a lot, in order to give his son, Ali, a proper education – as an accountant – therefore it strikes Parvez very hard when Ali rejects him, drops out of school and becomes and orthodox Muslim. Parvez believes that a good education, a good job, a family and that you can live your life as you want to, is important.