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Dear Kate and Ashley 17.01.11 New York

It’s me Peter your dad, now it is ten years ago I have seen you. I miss you very much, I cried every night and day, but I dont have opportunity to come home. Ashley you was only 4 years old, and you Kate you was 7 years old. Now i will tell you about why I had leave you’re alone in Canada, and give you to peoples your don’t know who they was. I dont had another opportunity, we were poor, your mother was dead, and I couldn’t take care of your, I don’t have some job. I get a good idea; i think it was a good idea. I give you to another family, so they could take care of your. I planned that I should go to New York get a good job, come back and so could i take care of you. I take the plane to New York, i had saved up some money to take the plane. New York was very big, in the start it was very hard, i couldn’t find some job, i searched and searched in the end i get a good friend named Oliver, he was really sweet, he help me to find some job, he worked on a chocolate fabric, he ask his chef about I could get a job there, the chef says that he don’t need more workers, but Oliver was very good on his job, so his chef says that he will consider it. The chef accepted me and I get a job in the chocolate fabric, it was a very good job, and i earned ok money. Oliver was only 24 years old, and he doesn’t have a wife, he lived alone, i moved together with Oliver, we earned good money together and buy a new big villa. I had planned that i should come back to Canada so we everybody could move to New York, so we could start a new life there, but I would earn little more money before I would come back to Canada. My chef was very ill, he says that if he die, should me and Oliver be the new chef. Our chef dead, and now it was us, who were the chef. We earned very much money, now we was moneymakers, the money do that I forget you, and everything, now was money my life, it was everything for me, i could not see another thing than money, but we had many bills, we don’t pay the bills, and it’s end very bad, we lost everything we owned, our money, our house, our job, everything, the fabric closed, now we was homeless, me and Oliver, we don’t know what we could do, but now I now that Oliver not was a real friend, he had family near him in New York, he get his own way, and now was Oliver away. I had it really hard i was mentally down, I hate myself, I hate my life, I would just die, now i know that I love you so much, but the only thing I think was to die. I live outside it was really hard for me, from moneymaker to homeless, i begged for money, but I just earned about 5 euro on a day, it was only enough to get some food. Some days I could eat food, because I used my money to drink alcohol, to forget everything. I get a friend named Sarah, she helps me, she gives me old dresses, and food. She looks like your mother, beautiful green eyes, brown hair, white skin, and a very sweet smile. Now I could see I don’t was 100% normal, I could feel something was wrong, i see the reality in the life, now I could feel how much I miss you, i tried to get a new job, and now I have it ok, I had found a job again, and i feel that I’m in love in Sarah. Kate and Ashley, I hope that you can forgive me, i know that I was a very bad father, and I don’t where there in your hard days. I hope so much you are ok, I will come back, to Canada nearly, and I hope so much you’re still live there unharmed.

Your dad Peter…

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