Abstract ? Hjælp :(

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Jeg har lavet min abstract, men jeg synes den er blevet rigtig skidt.. Er der eventuelt nogen der har nogle idéer til forbedringer eller rettelser ? Er åben for ALT :)

jeg skriver om papir aviser versus webaviser, i afsætning og dansk.

Do you think that you are making a difference, by choosing which way you want to obtain your daily news? You probably don’t, but for the newspapers you are. The culture about newspaper is dying, and online newspapers are taking over. But are we the one to let it happen? Newspaper reading is a part of our culture, a nice habit, which is a part of the Danish culture, and the culture in most countries worldwide. But there is a need for letting the younger generations be a part of it. To show them what a great and vital way it is to catch news. The million dollar question is know; are we supposed to let either the online newspaper or the conventional newspaper die? Or shall we make them work together in a way that is appropriate for the readers as well as the publishers? I have used several methods and archetypal to try to figure out the most optimal way to find an outcome to the topic. I have then come to the conclusion, that the most advantageous way to continue, for the newspaper: Politiken will be to find a suitable way to make an income with both the newspaper in paper format and the online newspaper. Because the modern society are very busy and rushed and preferences are various, so many don’t have the time to go out and buy a newspaper and put time aside to read it, therefore there need do be alternatives for the individuals