Korrektion af grammatik

Jeg har stirret mig blind på følgende tekst, og jeg ville blive yderst taknemmelig, såfremt nogen vil rette den:

“Slumdog Millionaire” is a romantic drama film from 2008, which is directed by Danny Boyle and written by Simon Beaufoy.
There are a lot of interesting features in the movie, but the – perhaps – most interesting is the picture of India as represented in the movie. The audience sees what conditions in question during which, respectively Jamal and Salim, the main character and the main character’s brother, are brought up – more specific in the slum.
The contrast between rich and poor is huge, which manifests several times in the movie through the treatment of the poor, while the rich ones are allowed to do anything they want.
The rich ones are in possession of money and thus power, while the poor ones do not have any ma-terial goods – just a vague hope of one day getting in possession of better conditions.
Money is of vital significance in India, by virtue of becoming a chance to get out of the social status, in which you are trapped, since you get a new start and therefore a new life. For that reason there is a lot of corruption all over India, which leads to a hard time trusting each other.
Furthermore, the movie delineates and accentuates the more general, and also the more garish, conditions in India by the aid of Jamal’s and Salim’s childhood and youth, which expresses itself throughout numerous episodes in the movie.
Jamal and Salime flee from their home, because their mother dies during the Bombay Riots, even though the plot centers on the love story between Jamal and Latika.
This is the reason why they later on meet a man, whose name is Maman, who tries to make Jamal blind, thus making a lot more money than usual.
When Salim comes to a standstill, Maman evinces his opinion about the slumdogs, ”Salim, you’ve got to make a decision; either become like and get out of the slum, or forever be a…”, whereupon he spits on the ground indicating that he scorns the slum.
Salim develops in a negative direction during the film, since he starts by shooting Maman, and subsequently offers himself to the rivalizing gangster – named Javed – in order to get a job.
This indicates that Salim is a representive for the underclass in the Indian society. The people in the underclass do not see any other way than participating in organized crime, in order to get away from the social layer in which they are stuck.
As opposed to his big brother, Jamal is a positive example of the social mobility being a reality in India – without being involved in organized crime.
Jamal emerges as being a role model for the entire underclass of India, and therefore the underclass keeps up with the show – although, he participates without directly wanting to move from a social layer to another, but in order to be reunited with Latika.


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