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i need help.. ret my stil

24. februar 2008 af sara_b1988 (Slettet)
goddag... :) er der nogen friske mennesker der gider rette min stil?

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24. februar 2008 af .:Tarzan:. (Slettet)

sæt den ind her - så er der flere der vil hjælpe..

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24. februar 2008 af sara_b1988 (Slettet)

okay to sek.

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24. februar 2008 af sara_b1988 (Slettet)

The family is on vacation in Thailand to visit their daughter who is working there as an English teacher. The story takes place in Thailand where the father is very nervous and confuse, but he tries to hide his fright ness for his wife, who is very scared too. The family got lost in a city in Thailand. The place they got lost in is very confusing and, no one didn’t even spoke English, and this makes them very scary, even though Suzanne, the daughter tries to relax them. The story takes place in only one place, the road. In this line it shows us how scared the mum, Eileen is: page 2, line, 30 “Suzanne strode towards the corrugated-iron huts. “where are you going?” Eileen asked quickly” and Suzanne who isn’t as scared as her Mum choose to answer simply and relaxing page 2 line 32” where d’ you think? Chill out Mum”
A few moments later four men turned up and begang to spoke with the family. The man was a native and he sounded like a druken man. Here we see the difference between the culture and everything is new for the family, the people, the enviroment, and new experiences. Suzanne spoked Thai with him, but he answered in english. The thai mann was a english teacher from the Eastern Thailand. The man was not alone, he was with three other guys and this was a threat to alex who felt a little alone with two women, that he has to protect from 4 guys. This wasnt easy for Alex and it maked him a little nerveours abouth the thought that he was the only man in his family. Page 3 line 71” Alex was aware again of his heart thumping. There were four of them, and only himself, with his wife and daughter...”
Suzanne is very interested in a country where everything are so different than she used to in her culture. And we see tat in many times in the story. Suzanne is a litltle different than her parents. She is afraid for the strangers and she takes everything so calm. And it seemd to that she likes to meet new people. And she is a open-minded person.
“They’re nice people, Dad (…) everything’s going to be alright”. (Line. 127-128).
The thought of how beutiful Thailand is, is gone for the mother and the fatherbegative thougts about the country and they only see negative things. Eileen is a nervours mother during the whole trip, she is so scared for the four men who only wanted to help the family. Suddenly the father began to think about Eileens chilhood when she was at her daughters age, and when she took LSD. And maked him a little afraid when he thought about that. And this is a picture of what young people could think of doing at that age. They are testing their limits which can results to bad things or good thngs in their life. And they dont even thinks about the consequence. Alex began to be nervours again after he got a beer from the men. He thought that they would do something wrong to them, and he had this responsiblitie that he was so afriad of.
“There had been a role reversal here” (Line 39) The roles has changed. The father is mlike a little child. And he is suddenly losing his roles. Suzanne who is not so afriad like her father is, is very calm. And dosnt show any reaction of bneing afraid. She tries to comfort her father. And therefore she suddenly have the role as being a father to both of her parent. And this makes the father a little sad and confusing. How can a little child take over the responsibelitie?
The thai mann told them that there will come a car right away to pick them up, and drive them home again. But the father didnt seem to like to be with the men any ore. He thinks that they shall go on before it gets dark. The daughter tries to relax them al, and tells them taht this are really nice people. As soon they began to drive, the father suddently had a new picture of the country. It was a bit beutifull than before. He saw green grass and other beutifull things that maked him smile. Page 5 line 154”.. Alex felt he had never seen anything so beautiful...” it wass all about trustin the people in the country and have new experience that you shouldnt be afraid of. Suzanne was very calm and brave.
The poem “follower” are written by Seamus Heaney. The poem shows us a example of a role-reversal, just like the story”eating sugar” in the poem it says that the father is normally the leader in a family, and his children will look up to their father and follow his road. And when the child gets olderthe roles 3will change and the father will now follow the child, but it dosnt happen in “eating sugar” because the father didnt seem to accept that his daughter will be the leader for him. The tex “trust between culture” : the tourist. Is about when two cultures meets each other and how they are looking upon each other. There are a lot of difference between “us” and “them” like it says in the text, like when Eileen and Alex are in Thainland. They are acting very afarid and nervours because of the strangers, and that is bacause they look so different, then they used to and that is why the theme in the story is culture.
2)
the language English is a very famous and important language for all the people around the world. Most of the country do speak english as a sewcond language, and there some places where they only speaks france as a second language. But mostly are able to speak just a little bit with some helping word, like in eating sugar, when the thai tried to help the americans. They couldnt speak as well as the americans, but they were able to start a dialoge between them.

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24. februar 2008 af sara_b1988 (Slettet)

nå det hjalp vist ikke at sætte den ind.

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25. februar 2008 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)

jooo jeg vil hjælp dig.

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25. februar 2008 af OnlyMe07 (Slettet)

The family is on vacation in Thailand for a visit to their daughter who works as an English teacher. The story takes place in Thailand where the father is very nervous and confusion, but he tries to hide his fear for his wife ness, which was very scared. The family was lost in a town in Thailand. The place where they were lost in is very confusing and nobody even spoke English, and that makes them very narrowly, although Suzanne, the daughter tries to relax. The story takes place in just one place, the road. In this line shows us how frightened the mother, Eileen is: page 2, line 30 "Suzanne strode towards the corrugated iron huts." Where are you going? "Asked Eileen quickly" and Suzanne, who is not as afraid as her mother choose to answer simply and relaxed page 2 line 32 "where d'you think? Chill Out mama"
A few moments later, four men and turned to begang talked to the family. The man was born and he sounded like a man druken. Here we see the difference between the culture and everything is new to the family, the people, the environment, and new experiences. Suzanne spoked Thai with him, but he replied in Dutch. The thai mann was an english teacher from the eastern Thailand. The man was not alone, he was with three other boys, and this was a threat to alex who felt a bit with only two women that he protecting 4 boys. This was not easy for Alex and marked nerveours him a bit about the idea that he is the only man in his family. Page 3 line 71 "Alex was again aware of his heart thumping. There were four of them, and just him, his wife and daughter ..."
Suzanne is very interested in a country where everything so different than it used in its culture. And we see RU in many times in the story. Suzanne is a litltle other than her parents. She is afraid of the unknown and they take everything so peacefully. And it seemd that they like to meet new people. And it is an open-minded person.
"They are nice people, Dad (…) everything's going to be OK". (Line. 127-128).
The idea of how beutiful Thailand, has been elected to the mother and fatherbegative thougts about the country and see them only negative things. Eileen is a nervours mother during the entire trip, she is so afraid of the four men who only wanted to help the family. Suddenly, the father began to think about Eileens chilhood when she was on her daughters age, and when she took LSD. And it marked a bit scared when he thought about that. And this is a picture of what young people think of doing at that age. They are testing the limits of those results can do bad things or good thngs in their lives. And they dont even think about the consequence. Alex began to be nervours again after he got a beer from the men. He thought that they would have done something wrong to them, and he had this responsiblitie that he was so afriad.
"There was a role reversal" (Line 39) The role has changed. The father is mlike a small child. And he is a sudden loss of his roles. Suzanne who is not afriad as her father is very quiet. And dosnt any response from bneing scared. She tries to comfort her father. And why did they suddenly's role as a father of both her parents. And that makes the father a little sad and confusing. How can a small child on the responsibelitie?
The thai mann told them that there is a car immediately to pick-up, and drive them back home. But the father didn't seem to want to be with the men a rude. He thinks that they go before it gets dark. The daughter tries to relax them, and tell them that these are really nice people. When they began to drive, the father suddently had a new photo of the country. It was a bit beutifull than before. He saw green grass and other beutifull things that marked him laugh. Page 5 line 154 ".. Alex felt he never had anything so beautiful ..." it was all about trust the people of the country and have new experiences that you should not be afraid. Suzanne was very calm and brave.
The poem "follower" written by Seamus Heaney. The poem shows us an example of a role-reversal, as the story "eating sugar" in the poem says that the father is usually the leader in a family, and his children look up to their father and follow his path. And when the child gets olderthe roles 3will change and will now follow the father of the child, but it dosnt happen in "eats sugar, because the father didn't seem to accept that his daughter will be the leader for him. The tex 'confidence between culture ": tourists. Is about when two cultures to each other and how they are looking at each other. There is a big difference between "we" and "they", as said in the text, as when Eileen and Alex are Thainland. They are acting very afarid and nervours because of the strangers, and this is bacause they look so different than she used and that is why the theme in the story is the culture.
2)
The English language is a well-known and important language for all people across the world. Most of the country do speak english as a sewcond language, and there are some places where they only speak france as a second language. But usually are able to speak, but a little help with a number of words, such as eating sugar, when the thai tried to help americans. She could speak like the americans, but they could start with a dialoge between them.

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31. januar 2010 af kaka15 (Slettet)

kan nogen hjælpe mig med at rette min engelsk stil plz det er på tirsdag 2/2-10

Vedhæftet fil:Mummies.docx

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31. januar 2010 af kaka15 (Slettet)

The family is on vacation in Thailand to visit their daughter who is working there as an English teacher. The story takes place in Thailand where the father is very nervous and confuse, but he tries to hide his fright nests for his wife, who is very scared too. The family got lost in a city in Thailand. The place they got lost in is very confusing and, no one didn’t even spoke English, and this makes them very scary, even though Suzanne, the daughter tries to relax them. The story takes place in only one place, the road. In this line it shows us how scared the mum, Eileen is: page 2, line, 30 “Suzanne strode towards the corrugated-iron huts. “Where are you going?” Eileen asked quickly” and Suzanne who isn’t as scared as her Mum choose to answer simply and relaxing page 2 line 32” where d’ you think? Chill out Mum”
A few moments’ later four men turned up and began to spoke with the family. The man was a native and he sounded like a drunken man. Here we see the difference between the culture and everything is new for the family, the people, the environment, and new experiences. Suzanne spooked Thai with him, but he answered in English. The Thai Mann was an English teacher from the Eastern Thailand. The man was not alone, he was with three other guys and this was a threat to Alex who felt a little alone with two women, that he has to protect from 4 guys. This wasn’t easy for Alex and it marked him a little nerve ours about the thought that he was the only man in his family. Page 3 line 71” Alex was aware again of his heart thumping. There were four of them, and only himself, with his wife and daughter...”
Suzanne is very interested in a country where everything is so different than she used to in her culture. And we see that in many times in the story. Suzanne is a little different than her parents. She is afraid for the strangers and she takes everything so calm. And it seemed to that she likes to meet new people. And she is a open-minded person.
“They’re nice people, Dad (…) everything’s going to be alright”. (Line. 127-128).
The thought of how beautiful Thailand is, is gone for the mother and the fatherbegative thoughts about the country and they only see negative things. Eileen is a nervous mother during the whole trip; she is so scared for the four men who only wanted to help the family. Suddenly the father began to think about Eileen’s childhood when she was at her daughters age, and when she took LSD. And marked him a little afraid when he thought about that. And this is a picture of what young people could think of doing at that age. They are testing their limits which can results to bad things or good things in their life. And they don’t even think about the consequence. Alex began to be nervous again after he got a beer from the men. He thought that they would do something wrong to them, and he had this responsibilities that he was so afraid of.
“There had been a role reversal here” (Line 39) the roles has changed. The father is mike a little child. And he is suddenly losing his roles. Suzanne who is not so afraid like her father is, is very calm. And doesn’t show any reaction of being afraid. She tries to comfort her father. And therefore she suddenly has the role as being a father to both of her parent. And this makes the father a little sad and confusing. How can a little child take over the responsibilities?
The Thai Mann told them that there will come a car right away to pick them up, and drive them home again. But the father didn’t seem to like to be with the men any ore. He thinks that they shall go on before it gets dark. The daughter tries to relax them all, and tells them that this is really nice people. As soon they began to drive, the father suddenly had a new picture of the country. It was a bit beautifully than before. He saw green grass and other beautiful things that marked him smile. Page 5 line 154”.. Alex felt he had never seen anything so beautiful...” it was all about trusting the people in the country and have new experience that you shouldn’t be afraid of. Suzanne was very calm and brave.
The poem “follower” is written by Seamus Heaney. The poem shows us a example of a role-reversal, just like the story ”eating sugar” in the poem it says that the father is normally the leader in a family, and his children will look up to their father and follow his road. And when the child gets older the roles 3will change and the father will now follow the child, but it doesn’t happen in “eating sugar” because the father didn’t seem to accept that his daughter will be the leader for him. The tax “trust between culture” : the tourist. Is about when two cultures meet each other and how they are looking upon each other. There is a lot of difference between “us” and “them” like it says in the text, like when Eileen and Alex are in Thailand. They are acting very afraid and nervous because of the strangers, and that is because they look so different, then they used to and that is why the theme in the story is culture.
2)
The language English is a very famous and important language for all the people around the world. Most of the country do speak English as a second language, and there some places where they only speaks France as a second language. But mostly are able to speak just a little bit with some helping word, like in eating sugar, when the Thai tried to help the Americans. They couldn’t speak as well as the Americans, but they were able to start a dialoged between them.
 

 her er den ::::::: håber det hjælp

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