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English abstract
Hej studieportalen.
Da jeg ikke er særlig god til engelsk vil jeg hører om i vil hjælpe mig med at finde fejl i mit engelske abstract. Jeg har selv læst det igennem en del gange, men jeg ved at der vil være fejl som jeg overser. Derfor kunne jeg godt bruge nogle andre øjne på om det overhovedet er god eller om det er rent sludder.
English Abstract
The study investigates how the two parts off Germany become reunited. The study will explain how the people, the society and the personal consequences have an effect on Germany today. The assignment will begin with an explanation off the Germany society up to the fall off the Berlin wall. Then there will be an analysis off some text material which will clarify the personal consequences and how the society was and is affected on what happened in Germany. At least you will find a discussion of the consequences off the joining off East-and West Germany. To build up a wall in such a big country and to divide one society into two can’t be done without consequences of the population and the society. To divide you away from your family is one of the hardest things you can be presented to here in life. But to us who haven’t tried that thing we can’t imagine how that feel we can only pretend to and that’s hard enough to try.
På forhånd tak.
Svar #1
19. december 2011 af Sharinjensen (Slettet)
Hej - jeg vil gerne prøve at hjælpe så godt jeg nu kan :)
- Det jeg har rettet skriver jeg med store bogstaver.
The study investigates how the two parts OF Germany become reunited. The study will explain how the people, the society and the personal consequences HAS an effect on Germany today. The assignment will begin with an explanation OF the Germany society up to the fall OF the Berlin wall. Then there will be an analysis OF some text material which will clarify the personal consequences and how the society was and is affected on what happened in Germany. At LAST (= til sidst?) you will find a discussion of the consequences off the joining OF East-and West Germany. To build up a wall in such a big country and to divide one society into two can’t be done without consequences of the population and the society. To divide you away from your family is one of the hardest things you can be presented to here in life. But to us who haven’t tried that thing we can’t imagine how that feel we can only pretend to and that’s hard enough to try.
- Jeg er heller ikke verdensmester til engelsk, og det var lige hvad jeg kunne finde :-D
Svar #2
19. december 2011 af Lewie (Slettet)
HAS skal være HAVE da det er flere ting man nævner, og derfor ses det som 'they'. Germany society skal være German uden y. Will begin skal være 'the assignment begins with'. Slet 'then' foran 'there will be'. At last skal bare være 'lastly'. Off the joining skal være 'of the reunification', Divide skal være 'split'. Consequences for, ikke consequences of. Fjern 'the' foran society. To be split apart from your family, ikke to divide you away from your family. to the people who haven't tried it, it can seen impossible o imagine how it feels. We can only pretend, and the imagination ifself is hard enough to grasp.
Det burde være nogenlunde nu :) post det igen med de rettede fejl hvis det er. Håber virkelig det kan bruges, ved hvor svært det kan være :) sig til hvis der er spørgsmål til omskrivningen!
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