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Abstract

This study examines musicals as a genre, and the characteristics of this type of genre. Additionally, the paper discusses differences between American and Danish musical tradition. The focus of this paper is to give an analysis of the Broadway musical West Side Story. Furthermore, the analysis of the musical is compared with two other musicals; the American musical Hair and the Danish musical Mød mig på Cassiopeia (Meet me on Cassiopeia). The results of the paper are that love is an important theme and message in all three musicals. An analysis of these musicals shows however, that Shakespeare has been and inspiration for the American musicals. Besides this, the analysis concludes that music and songs are the most important things, when it comes to musicals. The spoken words can be left right out if necessary.
This paper also concludes a discussion of musicals vs. films and what happens, when a musical is transferred into movies. A musical cannot be replaced with a movie no matter how great the movie is. The musical will always have a certain charm and intensity, which no other media can give.
 

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