Abtract, er det ok?

Hej alle..

Sidder her og er færdig med min SRP.
Men jeg mangler at få styr på mit abstract.
Tænkte der var nogle der ville give respons, og eventuelt fortælle hvad det mangler eller hvad det gerne måtte undgå?

Mit engelsk er ikke særlig godt, så hvis nogle vil rette fejl er de meget velkomne.
Men mit indhold er jo det vigtigste, og det jeg søger respons på.

Her er det:
This paper examines infatuation and love, because everyone experiences it once in their lifetimes. I will account for infatuation and love, biological and psychological, and analyze “Parforholdet afhænger af opdragelse og personlighed”, and compare this with “Kærligheden er ustyrlig” . Finally, at last I should evaluate the relationships condition in the modern society.
I have read some books, and looked on the internet, to get a lot of knowledge about the topic. I accounted for infatuation and love, with my knowledge about the whole topic in my head. I analyzed “Parforholdet afhænger af opdragelse og personlighed”, with help from psychological theories. Afterwards I compared the two articles. With help from the contest of the two articles, and my knowledge, I found out that the two articles had a connection. Then I evaluated the relationships condition in the modern society, concerning, how the relationship had been and how it is today, divorces, independence and singles.
With all this writing and reading, have I found out that the body gets bombed with hormones and neurotrnsmitterstoffer. The childhood takes part in who we pick as our partner, and how the relationship would be.
In other words, there is a connection between love and infatuation, biological and psychological.

Mit overordnede emne er Kærlighed og forelskelse i fagene biologi og psykologi.

Håber der er en eller flere der vil hjælpe