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Abstract
Hej :-D Da jeg ikke er helt sikker på mit abstract, vil det være dejligt, hvis en vil læse det igennem for fejl:
Abstract:
This paper examines how the Black Death, which was the cause of much death, ravaged Europe in the Middle Ages in the 1300s. The focus will be on where and the plague ravaged and who got hardest hit. Through an analysis of infection with Yersinia pestis, which is a facultative anaerobic, intra-cellular, gram-negative rod-shaped bacteria, the paper examines how the immune system reacts with infections of this type of plague being involved the experiment Immunodiffusion. To approach my problem, I have read a lot of literature about the plague and the Immune system. The analysis contains furthermore a statement of diagnosis and treatment possibilities today. Furthermore, the paper contains a description of the contemporary time understanding of and reaction to the Black Death and its significance for the contemporary time based on various historical sources, and an explanation of the production of DNA vaccination, which is still not on the market. Based on sources and my analysis, I conclude that the Black Death should be recorded as a pandemic, because the plague, in a large graphical area, had an impact on humans and animals.
Svar #1
18. december 2016 af Hannahr98 (Slettet)
Hej! Jeg ville måske ændre den første sætning til:
In this paper I will examine, how the Black death caused a high mortality, when it ravaged in Europe in the Middle Age in the 1300s. The focus of the assigment will be on, where the plague took it's place and which population got hit hardest. [...] Based on sources and on my analysis I conclude, that the Black Death should be recorded as a pandemic because the plague has had an immense impact on humans and animals in huge graphical areas.
Det ville nok også være godt, hvis du ikke ville bruge "furthermore" i to sætninger i træk og måske can du også ændre et af dine "contemporary time" til noget andet?
Jeg håber, at jeg kunne hjælpe :-)
Svar #3
19. december 2016 af FrederikStokholm (Slettet)
Hey
Jeg er ret sikker på, at de fraråder en at bruge orde som "jeg".
Derfor ville jeg skrive din første sætning, som du allerede har gjort det.
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