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12. marts 2007 af
Susan-sun (Slettet)
Hejsa..
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Dansk :
Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela blev født 18. juli 1918.
Han blev født i Qunu i Trankei. Han var den første fra sin familie der kom i skole, og det gjorde han i en alder af 7 år. Han begyndte på en Wesleyansk mission skole ved regenrpaladset, hvor hans lærer gav ham der det engelske navn Nelson. Kort tid efter døde hans far. Da han blev 16 år begyndte han at gå på Clarkebury Boarding Institute (Clarkebury kostskole), hvor han lærte om den vestlige kultur. Han fik din Junior Certificate-eksamen på kun 2 år , hvor det normalt tager 3.Da han var fyldt 19 år skiftede han til Wesleyan College i Fort Beaufort, hvor de fleste kongelige fra "Thembu-stammen" gik. Der begyndte han at interesse sig for Boksning og løb. Senere begyndte han på en bachelorgrad ved Fort Hare University. Der mødte han Oliver Tambo, som blev en ved og kollega for livet. Han boykottede universitets regler, og blev bedt om at forlade Fort Hare. Senere rejste til Johannesburg, hvor han færdiggjorde sin bachelorgrad ved University of South Africa (UNISA), efter det begyndte han at læse Jura ved Wits University. Senere uddannede han sig til advokat, hvilket var usædvanligt for en afrikaner på det tidspunkt. Som hel ung havde Nelson Mandela ikke for alvor været politisk engageret. Men det ændrede senere, derfor meldte den sorte afrikaner sig ind i ANC (African National Congress). Han blev chikaneret af myndigheder på alle tænkelige måder, derfor blev han fængslet. Konsekvensen blev at han ikke var i stand til at vare tage erhverv som advokat. I 1961 gik han underjorden, så han havde mulighed for at gør brug af sine politiske aktiviteter. I 1962 rejste Mandela rundt i Afrika for at indsamle midler til frihedskampen. Han vendte tilbage til sit hjemland i august måned. Få dage senere blev arresteret af det Sydafrikanske politi. Processen medførte i 1964 i af de fleste anklagede deri blandt Den sorte Pimpernel, blev dømt til livstid. Det var bedre end forventet, men havde frygtet dødsstraf.
Nelson Mandelas hjem i de næste årtier, blev den ugæstfrie ø, "Robben Island", som var en fængsels ø udefra den afrikanske kyst nær Cape Town. I 1980 begyndte der i den vestlige verden, en kampagne med budskabet; Løslad Mandela. De sydafrikanske magthavere tilbød Nelson Mandela at løslade ham på én betingelse, og det var at han forkastede frihedskampen. Hans ophold blev langt bedre da han blev flyttet til fastlandet. Han blev frigivet d. 11. februar i 1990. Efter løsladelse forsatte han med held - forhandlingerne om afskaffelsen af apartheid. I 1993 tildeltes han i fællesskab med den daværende sydafrikanske leder F.W. de klerk - Nobels fredspris. D. 27. april 1994 blev det første demokratiske parlamentsvalg afholdt i Sydafrika. Nationens første folkevalgte præsident blev den 75 årig mand, Nelson Mandela.
Engelsk:
Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela got natural born 18. july 1918.
He got natural born in Qunu in Trankei. He was the first from your kindred is come in school, and the did he at the age of 7 years. He started by a Wesleyan mission school at regenrpaladset, how hans learn gave slough is that's english name Nelson. Not very long after died hans pop. When he got 16 years started he to have at it Clarkebury Boarding Institute (Clarkebury boarding school), how he taught about it western civilization. He got your Junior Certificate-eksamen by mere 2 years , how that's normally take 3.When he was soft centred 19 years skiftede he to Wesleyan College in Fort Beaufort, how most royal from "Thembu-stammen" vent. Is started he to interest itself too Pugilism and run. Hind started he by a baccalaureate at Fort Hare University. Is met he Oliver Tambo, which got a at and collegue too life. He boykottede collegiate rules, and got asked to forsake Fort Hare. Hind travelled to Johannesburg, how he færdiggjorde your baccalaureate at University of South Africa (UNISA), after that started he to study Justice at Wits University. Hind education he itself to advocate, what was excessively too a african by that's moment. Which whole youngster had Nelson Mandela do not seriously been politician committed. Excepted that's changed hind, on that account reported it black african itself in this ANC (African National Congress). He got chikaneret of authorities by all tænkelige ways, on that account got he captivated. Konsekvensen got to he do not was able to fat take discoloration which advocate. In 1961 vent he underjorden, then he had occasionally to do applying of his political activities. In 1962 travelled Mandela around in Africa to nob bankroll to the fight for freedom. He turned back to one's homeland in augustus month. Get days hind got arrested by the Sydafrikanske police. Process medførte in 1964 in of most accused there amongst It black Pimpernel, got jugded to livstid. That's was better than could be expected, excepted had feared capital punishment.
Nelson Mandelas home in the next decades, got it ugæstfrie isle, "Robben Iceland", which was a fængsels isle from outside it afrikanske seaside adjoining Cape Town. In 1980 started is in it western world, a campaign out of the message; Løslad Mandela. They sydafrikanske power structure offered Nelson Mandela to leave slough by one proficiency, and the was to he forkastede the fight for freedom. Hans stay got out and away better when he got moved to the mainland. He got released d. 11. february in 1990. Emulatesbildet release forsatte he out of luck - the negotiations about afskaffelsen of apartheid. In 1993 tildeltes he jointly with it of that time sydafrikanske pass through F.W. they klerk - Nobels peace prize. D. 27. april 1994 got that's first demokratiske general election beloved in Sydafrika. The nation's first representatives presidential got it 75 årig man, Nelson Mandela.
Kunne I rette mit engelsk for grammafejl etc...
Dansk :
Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela blev født 18. juli 1918.
Han blev født i Qunu i Trankei. Han var den første fra sin familie der kom i skole, og det gjorde han i en alder af 7 år. Han begyndte på en Wesleyansk mission skole ved regenrpaladset, hvor hans lærer gav ham der det engelske navn Nelson. Kort tid efter døde hans far. Da han blev 16 år begyndte han at gå på Clarkebury Boarding Institute (Clarkebury kostskole), hvor han lærte om den vestlige kultur. Han fik din Junior Certificate-eksamen på kun 2 år , hvor det normalt tager 3.Da han var fyldt 19 år skiftede han til Wesleyan College i Fort Beaufort, hvor de fleste kongelige fra "Thembu-stammen" gik. Der begyndte han at interesse sig for Boksning og løb. Senere begyndte han på en bachelorgrad ved Fort Hare University. Der mødte han Oliver Tambo, som blev en ved og kollega for livet. Han boykottede universitets regler, og blev bedt om at forlade Fort Hare. Senere rejste til Johannesburg, hvor han færdiggjorde sin bachelorgrad ved University of South Africa (UNISA), efter det begyndte han at læse Jura ved Wits University. Senere uddannede han sig til advokat, hvilket var usædvanligt for en afrikaner på det tidspunkt. Som hel ung havde Nelson Mandela ikke for alvor været politisk engageret. Men det ændrede senere, derfor meldte den sorte afrikaner sig ind i ANC (African National Congress). Han blev chikaneret af myndigheder på alle tænkelige måder, derfor blev han fængslet. Konsekvensen blev at han ikke var i stand til at vare tage erhverv som advokat. I 1961 gik han underjorden, så han havde mulighed for at gør brug af sine politiske aktiviteter. I 1962 rejste Mandela rundt i Afrika for at indsamle midler til frihedskampen. Han vendte tilbage til sit hjemland i august måned. Få dage senere blev arresteret af det Sydafrikanske politi. Processen medførte i 1964 i af de fleste anklagede deri blandt Den sorte Pimpernel, blev dømt til livstid. Det var bedre end forventet, men havde frygtet dødsstraf.
Nelson Mandelas hjem i de næste årtier, blev den ugæstfrie ø, "Robben Island", som var en fængsels ø udefra den afrikanske kyst nær Cape Town. I 1980 begyndte der i den vestlige verden, en kampagne med budskabet; Løslad Mandela. De sydafrikanske magthavere tilbød Nelson Mandela at løslade ham på én betingelse, og det var at han forkastede frihedskampen. Hans ophold blev langt bedre da han blev flyttet til fastlandet. Han blev frigivet d. 11. februar i 1990. Efter løsladelse forsatte han med held - forhandlingerne om afskaffelsen af apartheid. I 1993 tildeltes han i fællesskab med den daværende sydafrikanske leder F.W. de klerk - Nobels fredspris. D. 27. april 1994 blev det første demokratiske parlamentsvalg afholdt i Sydafrika. Nationens første folkevalgte præsident blev den 75 årig mand, Nelson Mandela.
Engelsk:
Nelson Rolihlahla Mandela got natural born 18. july 1918.
He got natural born in Qunu in Trankei. He was the first from your kindred is come in school, and the did he at the age of 7 years. He started by a Wesleyan mission school at regenrpaladset, how hans learn gave slough is that's english name Nelson. Not very long after died hans pop. When he got 16 years started he to have at it Clarkebury Boarding Institute (Clarkebury boarding school), how he taught about it western civilization. He got your Junior Certificate-eksamen by mere 2 years , how that's normally take 3.When he was soft centred 19 years skiftede he to Wesleyan College in Fort Beaufort, how most royal from "Thembu-stammen" vent. Is started he to interest itself too Pugilism and run. Hind started he by a baccalaureate at Fort Hare University. Is met he Oliver Tambo, which got a at and collegue too life. He boykottede collegiate rules, and got asked to forsake Fort Hare. Hind travelled to Johannesburg, how he færdiggjorde your baccalaureate at University of South Africa (UNISA), after that started he to study Justice at Wits University. Hind education he itself to advocate, what was excessively too a african by that's moment. Which whole youngster had Nelson Mandela do not seriously been politician committed. Excepted that's changed hind, on that account reported it black african itself in this ANC (African National Congress). He got chikaneret of authorities by all tænkelige ways, on that account got he captivated. Konsekvensen got to he do not was able to fat take discoloration which advocate. In 1961 vent he underjorden, then he had occasionally to do applying of his political activities. In 1962 travelled Mandela around in Africa to nob bankroll to the fight for freedom. He turned back to one's homeland in augustus month. Get days hind got arrested by the Sydafrikanske police. Process medførte in 1964 in of most accused there amongst It black Pimpernel, got jugded to livstid. That's was better than could be expected, excepted had feared capital punishment.
Nelson Mandelas home in the next decades, got it ugæstfrie isle, "Robben Iceland", which was a fængsels isle from outside it afrikanske seaside adjoining Cape Town. In 1980 started is in it western world, a campaign out of the message; Løslad Mandela. They sydafrikanske power structure offered Nelson Mandela to leave slough by one proficiency, and the was to he forkastede the fight for freedom. Hans stay got out and away better when he got moved to the mainland. He got released d. 11. february in 1990. Emulatesbildet release forsatte he out of luck - the negotiations about afskaffelsen of apartheid. In 1993 tildeltes he jointly with it of that time sydafrikanske pass through F.W. they klerk - Nobels peace prize. D. 27. april 1994 got that's first demokratiske general election beloved in Sydafrika. The nation's first representatives presidential got it 75 årig man, Nelson Mandela.
Svar #1
12. marts 2007 af solsikke (Slettet)
Du har ikke på et eneste tidspunkt lavet om på ordstillingen. man har ikke den samme ordstilling på dansk og engelsk. Der er en del ord du har skrevet på dansk. Kunne du ikke prøve at kigge på det?
Svar #2
12. marts 2007 af Susan-sun (Slettet)
hvad mener du.. Jeg har kigget på det.. Jeg har brugt ordbog og word siger også det er korrekt.
Kunne du ikke kigge på det??
Jeg skal bruge det i morgen,
Kunne du ikke kigge på det??
Jeg skal bruge det i morgen,
Svar #3
12. marts 2007 af Susan-sun (Slettet)
Jeg har rettet og kigget på det....
Kan du nu se på det ??
He was born in Qunu i Trankei. In an age of 7 years old he was the first member of the family to go to school. He first went to a Wesleyan missionary school at the regent palace, where his teacher gave him the English name Nelson. Short after his father died. When he was 16 he went to Clarkebury Boarding Institute where he studied Western Civilisation. He earned the Junior Certificate exam in just 2 years, even though it normally takes 3 years. When he was 19 he changed school to the Wesleyan College in Fort Beaufort where most of the royalty from the Thembu tribe went. There he started showing an interest in boxing and athletics. Later on he started his bachelor at Fort Hare University. This was where he met Oliver Tambo, who was to become his life-long friend and colleague. He dismissed the rules of the university and was therefore asked to leave Fort Hare. He then went to Johannesburg, where he then finished his bachelor at University of South Africa (UNISA). After that he began studying law at Wits University, followed by an education as lawyer, which was unusual for an African at that time.
In his early life Nelson Mandela had never really been interested in politics. However, this changed later on and was the reason why the black African joined the ANC (African National Congress). He was harassed by the authorities in all possible ways and was finally imprisoned. This meant that it was no longer a possibility for him to become a lawyer. In 1961 he went under ground thus enabling him to participate in political activities. In 1962 Mandela travelled to Africa to raise funds for the fight for independence. He returned to his home country in August. Only few days later he was arrested by the South African police. A trial in 1964 resulted in a life sentences for most of the accused, one of them being The Black Pimpernel. This was a better outcome than expected, since everyone had expected the death sentence.
Nelson Mandela’s home in the next few years was to be the inhospitable island “Robben Island”, which was a prison island on the offshore of Africa, close to Cape Town. In 1980 a campaign was started in the Western world with the message: “Free Mandela”.
The South African rulers offered to release Mandela on one condition: he had to forget about his fight for independence. His living conditions were greatly improved when he was transferred to the main land. He was released on the 11th of February, 1990.
After his release he was successful in his struggle for equality, thus abolishing apartheid. In 1993 he was awarded, by the collaboration of the then South African leader, F.W. de Klerk, the Nobel peace prize. On the 27th of April, 1994, the first democratic general election in South Africa was held. The first popularly elected president of South Africa was the then 75 year old man, Nelson Mandela.
Kan du nu se på det ??
He was born in Qunu i Trankei. In an age of 7 years old he was the first member of the family to go to school. He first went to a Wesleyan missionary school at the regent palace, where his teacher gave him the English name Nelson. Short after his father died. When he was 16 he went to Clarkebury Boarding Institute where he studied Western Civilisation. He earned the Junior Certificate exam in just 2 years, even though it normally takes 3 years. When he was 19 he changed school to the Wesleyan College in Fort Beaufort where most of the royalty from the Thembu tribe went. There he started showing an interest in boxing and athletics. Later on he started his bachelor at Fort Hare University. This was where he met Oliver Tambo, who was to become his life-long friend and colleague. He dismissed the rules of the university and was therefore asked to leave Fort Hare. He then went to Johannesburg, where he then finished his bachelor at University of South Africa (UNISA). After that he began studying law at Wits University, followed by an education as lawyer, which was unusual for an African at that time.
In his early life Nelson Mandela had never really been interested in politics. However, this changed later on and was the reason why the black African joined the ANC (African National Congress). He was harassed by the authorities in all possible ways and was finally imprisoned. This meant that it was no longer a possibility for him to become a lawyer. In 1961 he went under ground thus enabling him to participate in political activities. In 1962 Mandela travelled to Africa to raise funds for the fight for independence. He returned to his home country in August. Only few days later he was arrested by the South African police. A trial in 1964 resulted in a life sentences for most of the accused, one of them being The Black Pimpernel. This was a better outcome than expected, since everyone had expected the death sentence.
Nelson Mandela’s home in the next few years was to be the inhospitable island “Robben Island”, which was a prison island on the offshore of Africa, close to Cape Town. In 1980 a campaign was started in the Western world with the message: “Free Mandela”.
The South African rulers offered to release Mandela on one condition: he had to forget about his fight for independence. His living conditions were greatly improved when he was transferred to the main land. He was released on the 11th of February, 1990.
After his release he was successful in his struggle for equality, thus abolishing apartheid. In 1993 he was awarded, by the collaboration of the then South African leader, F.W. de Klerk, the Nobel peace prize. On the 27th of April, 1994, the first democratic general election in South Africa was held. The first popularly elected president of South Africa was the then 75 year old man, Nelson Mandela.
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