Studieretningsprojekt/-opgave (SRP/SRO)
Rettelse af ABSTRACT
Hej vil i ikke lige tjekke den for de værste fejl? jeg er ikke så god til engelsk. På forhånd tak.
This SRP Report is about JBS and contains a short description of JBS, a strategic analysis of JBS’ opportunities for entering the English market. Thereby I will finish it with an evaluation whether it will be possible to enter the English market or not.
JBS is a big Danish company that is the market leader in Denmark and Norway. The growth is low and therefore JBS has to develop a new strategy.
The English market has a stable economy and the market is in a growth but it’s very difficult market to entry because there are many other underwear retail firms.
I have made a strategy where JBS makes a daughter firm called “LEEZ” which is focused on a small young fashion segment. The prices will be lower than other fashion firms.
Svar #1
16. december 2008 af a1990 (Slettet)
Det vigtigste er at du bruger formelle, beskrivende sætninger. dvs, du må ikke sige "I do, I will, I have investigated".... Du skal i stedet bruge passiv - Its is investigated, The paper studies/examines/explains osv.. Husk også at undlade forkortelser (lad være at skrive it's, men it is)
Har kun rettet lidt igennem, sidder selv med min egen opgave, men læs vejledningen til abstractskrivning der ligger herinde på portalen, tror det vil hjælpe dig.
This paper is about JBS and contains a short description of JBS and a strategic analysis of JBS’ opportunities for entering the English market. It is hereby estimated whether it will be possible for them to enter the English market or not. (skriv hellere hvad du rent faktisk har fundet ud af. Hvis det er muligt for dem, så skriv - it is estimated that it is possible- da abstractet er en opsummering, ikke appetizer, så du må/skal gerne "afsløre" dine konklusioner)
JBS is a big Danish company that is the market leader in Denmark and Norway. It is concluded that because the growth is low, the JBS has to develop a new strategy.
The English market has a stable economy and the market is in a growth (kan man ikke sige) but it is a very difficult market to enter because there are many other underwear retail firms. ændres evt til: Through examination of the English market (hvilket?præcisér), it is concluded that the production is increasing but at the same time it is a difficult field to enter, as there are many competing underwear retail companies.
(omformuler så sproget bliver passivt som forklaret) I have made a strategy where JBS makes a daughter firm called “LEEZ” which is focused on a small young fashion segment. The prices will be lower than other fashion firms.
alt i alt - læs vejledningen grundigt og brug deres formuleringer til at præsentere dine resultater...!
held og lykke
Svar #2
16. december 2008 af pivzen (Slettet)
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