hjælp til sangtekst

Hej

jeg går i 8 klasse.

og i min musik gruppe fik vi opgaven af skrive en sang, melodien skulle være fra en kendt sang.

jeg fik melodien " way back down to earth by justin bieber" der måtte godt være små sammenhæng mellem den sang man skulle bruge melodien fra og ens egen tekst. i min tekst skal jeg skrive. 1-3 vers et omkvæd og 1 bro.

min sang lyder sådan:

(vers 1)

you just stood there on your own.

drown down from the crowd.

and when you smile to me,

i see that there`s a person inside.

no one wants to help ya.

you are just a ghost in the dark.

but when i look into your eyes

i see a broken heart

(bro 1)

so i see (i see)

through the pain (through the pain)

and we will and will and will and will.

we  will love.

and we will feel.

and we`ll try and try and try and try.

so its up to you.

and its up to me.

 (omkvæd)

that we`ll find our

way back into love

i love you x2

oohh oohh

way back into love

into love x6

(vers 2)

your mamma past away

and your daddy left the town

so if you wanna love me

please show it some how

you once told me you cared

so tell me why you are scared?

oh, i stand far away some how

(bro)

(omkvædx2)

det var så den. melodien kan findes på youtube ved at skrive " justin bieber down to earth karaoke" teksten i sangen skulle nogenlunde passe med min sang

på forhpnd tak:)