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I fjernsynet i går aftes så jeg nogle punk – rockere, som fortalte os om deres livsstil, som er meget speciel. Alt, hvad de kunne sige, var, at de hadede vores samfund, hvis struktur skulle ændres fuldstændigt.
En af pigerne, hvis hår var grønt, havde en sikkerhedsnål i øret. Hendes tøj, som bestod af en gammel badedragt og 2 forskellige sko, var en protest imod materialismen i vores samfund.
Punk- rockerne kunne ikke lide interviewerens spørgsmål, som var meget direkte. Intervieweren, som de sagde var meget gammeldags, fik dem dog til at sige, at alt, hvad de ønskede, var frihed.

(dette afsnit skal rettes :) )

In the TV last night I saw some punk - rockers who told us omi television last night, I saw some punk - rockers who told us about their lifestyle that is very special their lifestyle that is very special. All they could say was that they hated our society whose structure should be changed completely.
One of the girls, whose hair was green, had a safety pin in your ear. Her clothes, which consisted of an old swimsuit and 2 different shoes, was a protest against materialism in our society.
Punk rockers did not like the interviewer's questions were very direct. The interviewer, who they said was very old fashioned, but got them to say that all they wanted was freedom