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Hej , jeg er ikke så god til engelsk, denne her oversæt skal jeg aflever idag kl 20 jeg ville lige se om der nogle der ville hjælpe mig :)
- Jeg skriver til dem, fordi jeg har observeret et faldende salg af især happy meal i mine restauranter i det sydlige del af london
Tendensen er den samme i alle restauranterne, der er færre mødre med børn, der besøger os. ligeledes har jeg konstateret en nedgang i antallet af fødselvsdagsfester pr. måned
Derfor er det nødvendigt, at der gøres en indstat for at forbedre omsætningen. jeg har overvejet at rette henvendelse til et par store skoler i området for at tilbyde at levere færdigepakkede måltider til de 5.10 åriger elver en eller to gange om ugen til fordelagtige priser.et sådant tilbud vil ikke kun skabe større opmærksomhed om mcdonalds kæden men vil også give kontakt til en større kundekreds og skabe fremtidige, loyale kunder.
Jeg beder om firmaets tilbagemeldning på den ovennævnte iniviativ og eventuelle forslag til andre måder at forbedre omsætningen på samt gode ideer til den videre markedsføring
Jeg håber i kan hjælpe mig.. ik noget google translate ellers kunne jeg godt gøre det selv :)
sætter stor pris på det
Svar #1
13. januar 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Ja, -mon du ikke skulle have fremlagt dit eget forslag ??
Svar #2
13. januar 2012 af Hening2 (Slettet)
I contact you because I have observed a decreasing sale of happy meals in my restaurants in the south London.
The tendency is the same in all restaurants. There are fewer mothers with kids who visit us. Also I have found a decline in the number of birthday parties pr. month.
Therefore I find it necessary to make an effort to improve the business. I have considered contacting a couple of major schools in the area to offer prepacked meals to the children in the age of 5-10 year once or twice a week to advantageous prices. An offer like that will not only give more attention to the McDonald’s chain, but it will also create a bond to a larger clientele and give us new loyal costumers for the future.
I ask for the company’s response of this initiative and possible proposals to other ways to improve the business plus advices to the marketing.
Svar #3
13. januar 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
I contact you because I have observed a decreasing sale of happy meals in my restaurants in the southern part of London.
The tendency is the same in all restaurants. (There are f)Fewer mothers with kids (who) come to visit us than some time ago. (Also, I have found) I have also noticed a decline in the number of birthday parties (pr.) per month.
(Therefore I find it necessary) It is therefore imperative to make an effort to improve (the) business. I have considered contacting a couple of major schools in the area (to) and offer prepacked meals to (the) children (in the age of) between 5(-) and10 years of age once or twice a week (to advantageous) at affordable prices. (An offer like that will not only give more attention to the McDonald’s chain, but it will also create a bond to a larger clientele and give us new loyal costumers for the future.) Not only is this bound to draw more attention to McDonald's, but also produce a number of loyal clients, thereby increasing patrons' custom.
(I ask for the company’s response of this initiative and possible proposals to other ways to improve the business plus advices to the marketing.)
Looking forward to a management response to this initiative I shall welcome any suggestions how to expand the sales and of course also any brilliant marketing proposals
Svar #4
13. januar 2012 af Hening2 (Slettet)
Vil du ik gøre det rent og sende det uden de der tykke streger??? :)
Svar #7
14. januar 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
I have decided to contact you because I have observed a decreasing sale of happy meals in my restaurants in the southern part of London.
The tendency is the same in all restaurants. Fewer mothers with kids come to visit us than some time ago.I have also noticed a decline in the number of birthday parties per month.
It is therefore imperative to make an effort to improve business. I have considered contacting a couple of major schools in the area and offer prepacked meals to children between 5 and10 years of age once or twice a week at affordable prices. Not only is this bound to draw more attention to McDonald's, but also produce a number of loyal clients, thereby increasing patrons' custom.
Looking forward to a management response to this initiative I shall welcome any suggestions of how to expand the sales and of course also any brilliant marketing proposals
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