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13. marts 2012 af DMatthiesen (Slettet) - Niveau: 8. klasse

Da jeg selv syntes jeg er usikker på genren essay, ville det være super hvis en flink person bare ville læse den igennem, og evt. give respons på om jeg opfylder kravene. Emnet er: Your dreams for the future.

 

Tag jeg ikke af, hvis der skulle være nogle gramtiske fejl, komma eller lignende fejl. Det skal jeg nok rette.


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13. marts 2012 af DMatthiesen (Slettet)

Den ville ikke uploade et .odf format.

Skriv en besked, hvis du gerne vil læse den igennem. Så kan jeg sende en e-mail.


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13. marts 2012 af DMatthiesen (Slettet)

Her er den.

 

Essay

In the future, I hope the racial equality will be finally over. All peoples must have the same rights. I've remembered when I was a age of 5, I called the black people for “nigger”. In the 60's a American named Martin Luther King hold a speech. He talked about racial. That the black people were lower in the system, than the white people. In the 1500s the black people were slaves. In these days they saw a black man as a poor man.
In Denmark many peoples call the chocolate covered marshmallow for a “negerbolle”. But why?
When I was a kid, I said “negerbolle” but first now, I can see that it's racist because of the color.
Today many peoples are not racists, including myself. I hope that, the development will be good past the next years. We can just see on Barack Obama, the first black president in the USA. It was a very big thing for the black peoples. A symbol on that the color has no influence in our world. In Denmark we get many peoples black peoples from Africa, and they live in our country. They are also normal, like us. So why should we call them stupid things. It's also a big symbol on, that the black people is the same as us.

My second dream or rather hope, is a little different. It's about the Danish government. In 2011, we've got a new government, existing of the Social Democratic party, the Socialist people's party and the Radical left. In my eyes they had not make some good things in the danish society. First they said, that we should work out of the financial crisis. Right after they would make a fee in Copenhagen. And now they set the prices  for a new leasing car up. Okay right? But who would lease a car when it's to expensive. All people will think that they rather should buy a car instead. I've remembered, before the election they said, that they will put the prices on buses and trains down. But no low prices right now.
I finally hope, that the government will go off in the past years. If we look at the measuring, we will see, that they not will win the election now. I will be very happy, if we could get a new government because right now. I am not impressed by the work they are doing right now.
I am a clearly liberal. Because right now, they have some good plans for the future.


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