Hjælp til engelsk stil

Hej, har nogle sætninger fra min stil som jeg, specielt med hensyn til kommaer, gerne ville have lidt hjælp til. Ved godt der er en del men håber alligevel en gider at skimme dem igennem :)

Nevertheless, most people tend to forget this, or just simply will not accept it.

By doing so, they commit hubris; or at least that is what the Greeks thought.

Doreen and Earl Piggot are dancing around in Hawaiian costumes, although she probably would be better of without him, and Zoe Trainer has just killed herself because her mother does not care about the fact that Casey is dead.

Therefore, I think, Altman has added the earthquake to show us that the characters are tied together in the same psychical and conceptual world.

For example, when Doreen runs Casey over Bitkower starts calling the Finnegan’s and Howard’s dad comes on a visit.

Questions that you might try to figure out, but you never can, and that is what makes this film, and live in particular, so laughable, but in the same time tragic and melodramatic.

We have dead bodies, Hawaiian festivity, unrestrained “clownny” boozing, a meaningless murder, and a new understanding between people “in the oven”.
Udtrykket "in the oven" er med fordi folk er ved at blive venner hende hos en bager, kan ikke finde det i min engelske ordbog så det kan jo være det kun er et dansk udtryk

Venter spændt :~)