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17. juni 2012 af kubra12 (Slettet)

Hej jeg har været op i engelsk skriftlig , og tror ikke lige det gik så godt tænkte på om i kan kigge den igennem og om i bare kan sige hvad jeg sådan cirka ville få ,,

 

Good morning everybody, I am Jane Buckingham. Thank you for invited me, and it is a pleasure to talk about Echo Boomers. I think you all are wondering what Echo Boomers is.  They are in age of 16-19 the oldest of the echo boomers are in collage, and youngest are going in grad school.  They use hours on internet, and prefer it more than TV. 8.000 million Of them is becoming Dominican generation of America.  People like them are using media, to everything and everywhere like to get in touch on phones and social networks.  Not only media they are defected by cars and cloths. Today are we all defects, of media and the social network. We all need to get in touch. On work at home and school, But of course echo boomers differs a lot, from other generation.  Like I am saying again we all are defected of the social network, and most of that is to have a phone.  Do the mobile have a camera, and touch effect on it. As echo boomers is this really important.  But as other generation, they are thinking the phones have to call and have that effect to send message, and that’s all. And I can come with more of the example of other generation, or I can just say other generation doesn’t think how they look, where they are buying the cloths, or how the phone is.

Social network is important like Facebook and Twitter, or SMS. This is one of the popular websites and one of the target groups is Echo Boomers. Yes is right, it is so easy to find target group to company, because of all the network users. So how can Facebook and twitter help a company? In Facebook young people is getting touch, not only young most of people in other country are getting in touch. So what should the company’s do? At first a company could use it with talking to young people on Facebook, to find target group on different ages. Not only that they can advertisement the product they have. Most of the company use Twitter, so it could be I good Idea to tell about the company you have and, increase the number of holiday. In twitter not only you friends but whole the world would see you and hear you meaning and you company. Most of the echo boomers are using those websites. How to do this is actually easy it’s to make a side in twitter tell about you company and just be sure the world would hear you. Like the price of travel tickets and what kind of country they can travel to. And you can tell about you company all the time. You can update new price new things, new tickets, and you can even get in touch with you target group and talk with them. And they can come with idea to you, and as company you can change it with using these ideas.  So that was how to get echo boomers as target group at social network.  Are there other way? Yes there are. Echo boomers have they own television and store.  So why not to try in that way? You can as company make papers, where you company name are on it and some travel sales you have to holidays.  So in that way you can take some of you employee to be in Echo Boomers stores or to just be on the entrance of the store. And in that way you can as company give this paper to every people who are coming in this store. Or not only paper you can let them stop and talk with them. Like tell them how cheap you company is and the
Opportunity it is as young people who don’t have a lot of money to buy a holiday trip in your company.  You can also as company post some papers without give them. Echo boomers television could be the best way to make them as target group. Every time they are looking in television you could as company advertising you company so in that way they knowing what you company are and every time you are advertising on media or on television is it important that you are saying how cheap it is. In that way you can also manipulate them with doing this. It was  all what I had to say, I hope you all just get little idea of what echo boomers are and I hope that it would help you company up with many ideas.
Thank you for the attention , if you have any questions I would do my best to answer it.

 

 


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To : [email protected]

From : [email protected]

Subject: e-survey

Dear MS Buckingham

Thank you for the questions I would do my best to answer them. 
As a young student do I use, social network like Twitter, Facebook, Hotmail and SMS too. Twitter is a big help to me. On Twitter whole the world can follow you, so twitter make me update about everything so it’s easy to me to know about what happened in the world. So I don’t only hear about my friends, but also about what they are happened in other countries. I don’t need to look at newspaper when I have my twitter.  But not only twitter, Facebook as all and SMS could even help me.  
I am not the biggest user of the television but, in television advertising is something that happened all the time. Like new product or films even new trends. Thank advertising I know the new product and the new movies that is coming out. The social network I use a lot is Facebook. Facebook make me to get touch with my friends. Like I can see new pictures of them, and I can be updated about like what they are doing. I can even get in touch with friends I have in other countries. I also get new friends in Facebook, I search sometimes and find some cute guys and write a text to them, so in that way we get friends. I use internet every day, I don’t remember a day I hasn’t use it. I use it 3-5 hour in a day. Television is not something I use a lot but 2-3 can I use in a day. Radio is something I never used just sometimes. I think last time I used it was when I was little, and when I use my car and wanted to hear some songs.

Hope that my answer helps you

Best regards

Student


Brugbart svar (1)

Svar #1
17. juni 2012 af STXstudine (Slettet)

Hej

Hvilket niveau har du det på, på hvilken uddannelse? 

Og hvad var opgaveformuleringen til dette spørgsmål?

 

 


Svar #2
18. juni 2012 af kubra12 (Slettet)

den første del er at jeg skulle skrive en manuskrift en slags tale hvor jeg så skulle forklare om ehno boomers som er unge . Her så skulle jeg gå ind og fortælle hvad det var om det var vigtig og hvad var forskellen var ved dette vis man ikke var som dem.

det andet er jeg skulle skrive en email til en hvor, som stiller mig spørgsmål som hvad for nogle social networks jeg bruger. Og hvor meget tid jeg brugerfor at se tv. og hvad jeg bruger social network til. og om jeg bruger radio.

 

Jeg har engelsk på A .. men føler bare det ikke gik så godt . hvad tror du jeg vil få


Svar #3
18. juni 2012 af kubra12 (Slettet)

forresten det er hhx 2 år


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Svar #4
20. juni 2012 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

Teksten er gennemsyret af utroligt mange fejl, grammatiske fejl, forkert ordstilling, forkerte verbalformer, kongruensfejl, forkert ordvalg, dansk sprogkonstruktion, i en grad, at det det mange steder er vanskeligt at forstå, hvad der egentlig menes.


Svar #5
20. juni 2012 af kubra12 (Slettet)

tror du jeg bare kan få en 02 ..


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Svar #6
20. juni 2012 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

Det har jeg ingen anelse om.


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