Er ordstillingen okay?

JNej, der er problemer med ordstillingen i nogle af dine sætninger. Jeg vil ikke rette dem for dig, men jeg vil godt give nogle redskaber til, hvordan du selv kan rette dine sætninger. 

Almindeligvis bruges ligefrem ordstilling på engelsk (subjekt før verballed), men der er undtagelser. Reglerne er, at der bruges omvendt ordstilling (verballed før subjekt) på engelsk, i nogle få, bestemte tilfælde:


Spørgende sætninger: Who are you? - Som du kan se placeres verballedet før subjektet.

Sætninger, der indledes med et nægtende adverbialled: Never before had I ... 

Sætninger med ordet "so" i betydningen også: I like pizza and so does my girlfriend 

Måske er der andre særtilfælde, som nogle universitetsuddannede indenfor engelsk kan inkludere i listen?

Kan du måske skrive de sætninger, jeg har fejl i? Du kan bare navngive dem 1,2 osv

Ja, det kan jeg da godt. Så kan du prøve at rette dem, og så er jeg sikker på, at der er en der gerne vil kigge på dine rettelser.

Sætning 1, 3, 10, 11 og 13 indeholder fejl i ordstlilingen. 

Fejl er markeret med fed skrift.

Hopefully come you all on Saturday
When it rains, everything gets wet
Yesterday gave my dad me money for a new bike
When I bought the bike, I said thanks to dad
In the evening I took the bike to my friend Brian
When he had saw the bike, he asked if/about he could borrow it
Before I said yes, he had already taken/wearen a helmet
Last/on Monday our hours began already xxx 7’oclock /at seven
When we came, our teacher said, that we came to late
On the way home played we soldiers
Unfortunately struck he his foot
After a quick meal, he ran down the stairs and out into the street
This year I will in Italy with my family
Finally decided he to take a rest
Before she discovered who he was, he gave her a kiss
In a moment he had emptied the bottle
While she was cooking, he opened the whine
Endelig kommer du!  =So, you are finally there !! We have waited one hour
Now I had enough of you! Out of here!
On the way out to the car, I met my brother

Der er et mylder af overflødige (og forkerte) kommaer !!

Man har normalt omvendt ordstilling, -ikke bare ved et nægtende adverbialled, men når en sætning indledes med et eller andet indskrænkende led.

Hvis der ikke indgår et modalverbum, omskrives sædvanligvis med "do".

Eks.

Hardly had it stopped raining when the sun broke out.

No sooner did I arrive at the station than she came rushing.

Only shortly before he died did he admit to his crimes.

Hopefully you come all on Saturday
When it rains, everything gets wet
Yesterday my dad gave me money for a new bike
When I bought the bike, I said thanks to dad
In the evening I took the bike to my friend Brian
When he had seen the bike, he asked if/about he could borrow it er det if eller about
Before I said yes, he had already taken/wearen a helmet er det så take eller wear
Last/on Monday our hour began already xxx 7’oclock /at seven hvad skal xxx betyde
When we came, our teacher said, that we came to late ingen anelse
On the way home we played soldiers
Unfortunately he struck his foot
After a quick meal, he ran down the stairs and out into the street
This year I will in Italy with my family er det så "I want to italy..."?
Finally he decided to take a rest
Before she discovered who he was, he gave her a kiss
In a moment he had emptied the bottle ingen anelse
While she was cooking, he opened the wine
So, you are finally there! We have waited one hour er det så wait
Now I had enough of you! Out of here! ingen anelse
On the way out to the car, I met my brother

Resten er rettet. Kig lige efter :)

Hopefully you will all come (all) on Saturday
When it rains, everything gets wet
Yesterday my dad gave me money for a new bike
When I bought the bike, I said thanks to (d)Dad
In the evening I took the bike to my friend Brian
When he had seen the bike, he asked if/about he could borrow it er det if eller about       ......if
Before I said yes, he had already (taken/wearen) put on a helmet er det så take eller wear
Last(/on) Monday our (hour) lesson began already xxx  at 7(’)o'clock /at seven hvad skal xxx betyde
When we came, our teacher said, that we came to late ingen anelse were late
On the way home we played soldiers
Unfortunately he (struck) ???? his foot
After a quick meal(,) he ran down the stairs and out into the street
This year I will (in) go to Italy with my family er det så "I want to italy..."?
Finally he decided to take a rest
Before she discovered who he was, he gave her a kiss
In a moment he had emptied the bottle ingen anelse
While she was cooking, he opened the wine
So, you are finally there! We have (waited) been waiting one hour er det så wait
Now I have had enough of you! Out of here! ingen anelse   Get out !!
On the way out to the car, I met my brother

Der er stadig millioner af kommaer der ikke skulle være der.