Oversættelse-fejl

Er der virkelig brug for myself?

Du skal se nærmere på gone (forkert form af to go). Desuden er hele sætningen smukt eksempel på Danglish, dvs. bogstavelige oversættelser fra dansk til engelsk; man kan godt nok gå til sport, men man kan ikke go to sport.

"I've been playing" – ingen brug for udvidet nutid. Overvej en anden tid.

"whole"...igen, Danglish. Overvej et andet ord med, i denne kontekst, samme betydning.

"I was born to immigrants" lyder langt bedre. (Hvordan kan man være immigrant til Danmark hvis man ér født i landet? Det er vist både et sprogligt såvel som politiskt spørgsmål.) ;)

I (myself) grew up in Aalborg(. I,), and like many other children (gone to) went in for / enjoyed any sport(.), and I've (been playing) played football almost (my whole) all my life(. B), but I've had) also met with  some challenges, though(. For (example,) one of which was the fact that  I grew up as a child of (second generation) immigrants. There (have been) were many challenges (for me) during my childhood.

=  "I  grew up in Aalborg, and like many other children  I went in for / enjoyed any sport, and I've  played football almost  all my life, but I've also met with some challenges, though, one of which was the fact that  I grew up as a child of  immigrants. There  were many challenges  during my childhood.