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HJÆLP! :)
Hej, jeg har den her stil for, til på fredag. Kan en eller anden venligst rette den igennem?
På forhånd tak.
Hi Lewis.
How are you? I can’t wait to see you either! I’m finally done with all my exams, and I've finally declared that my summer vacation has just begun. Now, I’m just waiting for your vacation to start, so you can join me and my family over here in Denmark. And for your question: Trust me, I have planned everything!
Denmark can sometimes be, wet! The weather can’t be compared to the weather in Australia. It can sometimes be unsteady, even in July! Therefore, I’m going to be very gently about the places we’re going to visit, with focus on the weather.
After you guys arrive, we’ll be getting you from the airport. Then you have some time to pack out your baggage, and just relax after the long trip. Then we’ll have some nice dinner, a surprise actually… Mmh! So basically, the first day is only based on relaxation.
The next day, we’ll probably rent a netto-boat for a cruising canal trip. A netto-boat is a huge boat where tourist can be guided for Copenhagen; we’ll therefore rent a little version of it and have a professional guide in, so we also can be guided. We’ll take out to ‘’Langelinje’’, were we can take some pictures of ‘’the little mermaid’’. Then we’ll sail back to the inner town, where we’ll get some lunch on the best buffet on this earth! We’ll after that, take a long walk through ‘’Strøget’’ which is a ‘pedestrian zone’. There we’ll be shopping and have fun.
The third day, we’ll take you guys to Tivoli. This is an amusement park, actually one of the most popular in Scandinavia. There, we’ll take a view on the museum and the garden and of course the many amusements. And by the way, do you and your family eat Chinese food? If so, there’s a great Chinese restaurant inside of Tivoli! Then we’ll drive back home, where I’ll have a friend coming over. She wants to meet you terribly much!
The last day, we’ll take to the cinema. I would love to see a movie with you. Your parents can and Juliet can have a trip to the local park, with my parents. And since you guys have to be in the airport before 6 pm, we need to get back quick so you guys can pack your baggage. It’s sad that it’s only a 3 days lasting visit. But yeah, I know that you have to take over to your family in England too, so I understand.
Hopefully, the weather will not ruin everything. Let’s hope.
Greet your family, and kiss little Juliet from me.
Svar #1
02. oktober 2012 af rakijovic
Man retter ikke noget igennem -- man retter det blot.
Du kan få fejlene markeret og derefter lov til at prøve igen. No free lunches here, darl.
Hi, Lewis,
How are you? I can’t wait to see you either! I’m finally done with all my exams, and I've finally declared that my summer vacation has just begun. Now, I’m just waiting for your vacation to start, so you can join me and my family over here in Denmark. And As for your question: Trust me, I have planned everything!
Denmark can sometimes be, well, wet! The weather can’t be compared to the weather in Australia. It can sometimes be it sometimes unsteady, even in July! Therefore, I’m going to be very gently (du skal ikke bruge adverbialform, men adjektivform. Tænk lige efter: skriver du hvad du skal være eller hvordan du skal være?) about the places we’re going to visit, with focus on the weather.
After you guys arrive, we’ll be getting you take you home from the airport (ja, det lyder jo ret indlysende, men, bevares...). (Then) you have some time to pack out your baggage you'll have some time to get all settled in and just relax after the long trip. Then we’ll have some a nice dinner, a surprise actually… Mmh! So basically, the first day is only based (overvej pladsbytte for de to ord) on relaxation. (Eller hvis du vil flotte dig med nogle tyvekronersord: will revolve entirely around relaxation / will be entirely relaxation-themed)
The next day, we’ll probably rent a so-called 'Netto-boat' for a cruising canal trip and sail in the Copenhagen canals / cruise the canals of Copenhagen. A Netto-boat is a huge boat where tourist (der er flere end én, ikke?) can be guided for (brug en anden præposition) Copenhagen; we’ll therefore rent a little (brug et andet adjektiv som antyder at noget er lille) version of it and have a professional guide in with us, so we also can be guided. (<- dobbeltkonfekt)
We’ll take out to (Danglish alert! Du har oversat tage ud til bogstaveligt.) ‘’Langelinje’ (stavefejl, og du behøver ikke anførselstegn omkring egennavne (proprier / proper nouns).)’, were we can take some pictures of ‘’the little mermaid’’ (igen, ingen anførselstegn, men egennavne skriver vi med stort begyndelsesbogstav).
Then (overvej at begynde sætninger med andet end 'then'...) we’ll sail back to the inner town, where we’ll get (nej, der er et andet verbum som passer bedre og ikke lyder så tvangsamerikaniserende) some lunch on the best buffet on this earth (A hint; restaurants that primarily offer buffets are...buffet restaurants.)!
We’ll after that (ordstilling), take a long walk through ‘’Strøget’’ (enough with the quotation marks, darl) which is a ‘pedestrian zone’. There we’ll be shopping and have (inkongruens i tid; se på formen du har valgt allerførst i sætningen) fun.
On the third day, we’ll take you guys to Tivoli. This is an amusement park (eller theme park), actually one of the most popular in Scandinavia. There, we’ll take a view (nej...overvej et andet ord for 'kig') on the museum, and the garden and of course the many amusements rides. And By the way, do you and your family eat Chinese food? If so, there’s a great Chinese restaurant inside of Tivoli! Then we’ll drive back home, where I’ll have a friend coming over. She wants to meet you terribly much!
The last day, we’ll take to the cinema (på dansk kan man tage et sted hen, but you can't take to a place...). I would love to see a movie with you (bestem dig for én variant af engelsk; cinema er BrE, men movie er AmE). Your parents can and Juliet can have (who now, what now?) a trip to the local park (can go for a walk in the park nearby?), with my parents. And since you guys have to be in (brug en anden præposition) the airport before 6 pm, we need to get back quick so you guys can pack (your baggage). It’s sad that it’s only a 3 days lasting three-day visit. But yeah, I know that you have to take over to (you can't take to places, and you can't "take over to somewhere" (tage over til et eller andet sted)) your family in England too, so I understand.
Hopefully, the weather will not ruin everything. Let’s hope so. (Eller bedre: fingers crossed!)
Greet your family, and kiss little Juliet from me.
► Vriendelikheid is net sinisme wat 'n jol gekry het! ◄ |||| ► Ljubaznost je samo cinizam što je dobio piće! ◄ ||||
► Prietenia este doar cinism care a băut puțin alcool ! ◄
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