oversættelse

hej.. er der nogen der vil kigge på min0 engelsk oversættelse. Jeg har skrevet de sætninger efter på dansk i parentes, som jeg er mest i tvivel om. Håber det er til at finde ud af. På forhånd tak..






Music in the Underground

It is an autumn morning in London and the beginning of a new working day for Taiken Mikkola. Together with a million other people, the 18 years old Finn walks into ( går ned i) the underground to begin the work of the day. But as soon as Mikola has arrived at the Undergrounds platform, he draws a trumpet out and is already at work.
It is hard work do (for både) feat and pride, but Mikola’s mood was none the worse( synes ikke at tage skade). >> London is the greatest place,>> he says, as he watches (betragter) the passenger’s face. You cannot make money in New York’s or Paris’ Underground, but London’s attitude (holdning) to the young people are very kind. In a 10 hours’ workday( på en 10 timers arbejdsdag), Mikola has the opportunity to own as much as £ 30( Mikola kan tjene så meget som 30£).
The idea is not only Mikola’s. But to survive and to be able to buy a bite of bread at the baker and a bit of meat at the butcher everyday, plays more than 500 young musicians from the hole would in the Underground.( for at kunne overleve og hver dag være I stand til at købe lidt brød hos bageren og lidt kød hos slagteren, spiller mere end 500 unge musikanter fra hele verden I londons undergrund). They play everything, between guitars and harp. Mikola and a lot other foreigners spends the years coldest month in the Underground.