oversættelse haster

Det ville måske være lidt bedre, hvis du kom med dit eget forslag, men nu har jeg jo lavet denne her oversættelse 2 gange, såeh...

The oldest comic strip in the world is in the village of Bayeux, Normandy. It is exhibited in an impressive museum, where the whole story is told with the aid of light shows, films and posters before one is let into the hall where the actual masterpiece is hanging.
The long exhibition case is illuminated by a great number of spotlights, otherwise is the room dark. At the entrance you are being supplied with head phones, so you have “text” to the pictures (English, German or French after your own choice). The narration is controlled by electronic impulses.
There are 58 pictures total, sewed on a piece of linen, which is 70 metres long. This enormous piece of handwork was fabricated in the 11th century. The narrators make it clear to everybody, that Vilhelm the Conqueror had every right to invade England and destroy the English army in the Battle of Hastings in 1066. For he had been cheated by the English King Harald, who had promised to make Vilhelm King of England but crowned himself instead.

Hov.. ser da lige fejl i det hele..

The oldest comic strip in the world is in the village of Bayeux, Normandy. It is exhibited in an impressive museum, where the whole story is told with the aid of light shows, films and posters before one is let into the hall where the actual masterpiece is hanging.
The long exhibition case is illuminated by a great number of spotlights, otherwise the room is dark. At the entrance you are supplied with head phones, so you have “text” to the pictures (English, German or French after your own choice). The narration is controlled by electronic impulses.
There are 58 pictures total, sewed on a piece of linen, which is 70 metres long. This enormous piece of handwork was fabricated in the 11th century. The narrators make it clear to everybody, that Vilhelm the Conqueror had every right to invade England and destroy the English army in the Battle of Hastings in 1066. For he had been cheated by the English King Harald, who had promised to make Vilhelm King of England but crowned himself instead.

Hmm.. hel oversættelse.. skam dig! Ikke at det generer mig ^^

Heh, jeg har den fulde, for at det ikke skal være løgn. Vi lavede den både i 1. og i 3. g., så det er underligt, at den ikke er helt gennemrettet.. Men som jeg sagde til nina, så må hun til en anden gang godt komme med sit eget forslag :)