Hjælp til oversættelse og kongruens!

Hej.

Jeg skal aflevere en oversættelse i morgen og forklare min brug af kongruens i de 4 første sætninger. Er der en der vil tjekke dem og evt. give forslag til hvad jeg skal skrive under kongruens halløjet?

I just received a letter from my uncle in America. He writes, that he made a lot of money recently. He tells, the fact that he inherited some money from an aunt, who also gave him the good advice to put them in the bank, and then live by the interests. Even though it was a good advice, my uncle did not think he could live by the interests. So one day he heard about the bank directors illegal money transactions. He used these data for extortion. It was naturally a success for my uncle who has been as poor as a church mouse his whole life. But the poor bank director had to sell a lot of his many beautiful furniture and antiquity’s. I almost feel sorry for him.

Ved godt man ikke kan have en præposition + that efter hinanden, men aner ikke hvordan jeg skal omskrive sætning nummer 2.