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Hjælp
Hej lektiehjælpere
Jeg har en tekst, som er skrevet på engelsk.
Vil bare høre, om der en sød en, der vil kigge om, der er nogle fejl. Jeg kunne ikke finde nogle. Håber der er nogle derude, som vil hjælpe mig.
På forhånd tak :)
Det er denne her:
The fable is written in plain language, because we use the same language in our daily day and that’s why it is easy to understand.The theme could be different, loneliness and bullying: the hare oppresses the tortoise. There is also a distinctive feature of this fable. It begins with “Once upon a time” and there is an opposite the weak and the strong one.
These two texts “The Emperor’s New Clothes” and “the tortoise and the hare” have both a similarity that they are fables. The Emperor loves his clothes and same does the hare. He likes to run and it seems like that the hare also wants the people to admire him and the emperor wants completely the same.
He wants his people to admire him and the emperor gets cheated and the same happens to the hare. He gets cheated by himself.
Svar #1
10. november 2013 af nad1 (Slettet)
Overall it is well written.
daily day = daily life
and that's why = therefore
Svar #2
11. november 2013 af OnceUponATime (Slettet)
in a plain language
the theme could be difference
Hvad mener du overhovedet med "and there is an opposite the weak and the strong one."? Overvej at omformulere (evt. anden ordvalg)
have both a similarity which is, that both are fables
"The emperor loves his clothes and same does the hare" - Overvej at omformulere
and the emperor gets cheated on
Disse er ummidelbart de største fejl :)
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