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Ferie i Istanbul
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A memorable trip to Istanbul
Dear readers welcome to my newsletter. I would like to share, my holyday experience with you. I want to tell you about my holyday in Istanbul because, it’s a very memorable place and the place mean a lot to me. Why? I will answer that at the end of my newsletter.
Arrival in Istanbul
My siblings, parents and I arrived late at night in Istanbul airport. Everyone including me was tired and exhausted, because of the long haul flight. The next destination was the hotel, my parents had rented. Our hotel was located in the heart of Istanbul. Near all the historic museums and the best shopping malls in Istanbul.
The first day
I woke up early in the morning. I couldn’t wait to go out. The weather was good. There was sunshine and the sky was blue. We ate breakfast, and afterwards we went out to explore the city. The City impressed me. The city was very beautiful the thing which impressed me the most, was all the beautiful historic mosques. I had never seen anything like this before. We continued to explore the city, but it was tough to do, because everyone who owned a store would want you to buy clothes, bags etc. It was annoying, but it dint ruin my vacation. We went home late at night, pretty much because we couldn’t get enough of the city.
The remaining days
We were in Istanbul for 14 days. We had fun in all the days. After a while, we had finally learned to know the city. We learned, among other things, bus stops and where the various shopping centers were. What I enjoyed most in the 14 days in Istanbul, was Bosporus. It was brilliant to sit in a boat and enjoying the sea and the beautiful view of Istanbul. It was definitely the best experience in the vacation.
Best place in the world
There were many things a liked in Istanbul. Istanbul is unique among the world’s cities I have been in. The city’s steep hills, topped with impressive mosques, make it a place of unforgettable views across its waterways. The sound callings to prayer were also a big moments for me. It was lovely to hear voices from many different of mosques.
Thanks for bothered to read my news article, I can definitely recommend you, to go to Istanbul. I will certainly return to Istanbul.
Svar #1
16. januar 2014 af Aves (Slettet)
Generelt skal du passe på, hvor kommaerne skal sættes - husk at den engelske komma er meget anderledes end den danske og har stor betydning for forståelsen og flow. Bortset fra det er der enkelte fejl hist og her, fx forkert ord ("holyday" - bør være "holiday") og forkerte formuleringer ("many different of mosques" - bør være "many different mosques"), her kan ordbøger være en stor hjælp.
Du har dog helt styr på dine tider - jeg har i hvert falt ikke lagt mærke til nogen fejl. Kudos til det!
Noget helt andet: jeg vil have forventet, at du nævnte Hagia Sophia..? ;)
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