Oversættelse - Loch Ness

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When you first arrive to the Scottish town, Inverness and take your first walk at the main street, you get the impression that a lot of the inhabitants of the town, lives by the myth about the Loch Ness monster. In almost every shop window you see Nessie-posters, cards over Loch Ness with information about where and when she was seen the last time, Nessie on postcards, “Scientific” drawings by different prehistoric retile which looks like descriptions of her, sea monsters of glass and porcelain, toys-Nessies with bagpipe and tam o’ shanter, books full of shocking anecdotes and scientifically treatises about this famous sea monster, who maintains to live in the muddy water, way down under the water level in the inconceivable deep Loch Ness.
Zoologists, who believe on Nessie’s existents, thinks that a prehistoric saurian family, so called plesiosaurus’, has survived in the deep of the sea, where it has lived by eel, salmon and trout, which is to be found in huge quantities in Loch Ness. The first written account about Nessie descends from the year 565, and since then Nessie has been seen many times, partly as a shadow right under the water level and partly as inexplicable humps in the water.
22nd July 1933 she actually came up from the water, if you should believe Mr. Spicer and his wife, who an early morning, drove through the winding road between the towns Dores and Foyers. They saw a giant creature lumber across the road, which at this point is very close to the edge of the lake. The creature had a long, snakelike tail and a big clumpy body and moved itself very fast out of sight and to the waterline.
At August the 20th 1952 she was also seen very closely, when Mrs. Greta Finlay, who live in Inverness, sad by her caravan at a parking place by Torr Point. She heard a splash in the water and saw the monster duck up right in front of her, so close to the edge that she swore that she could have “hit Nessie with a pebble”. In the meantime she did not have resourcefulness to through anything against Nessie, because she actually was so paralysed by fear until the giant animal despaired into the dark water.






Når man ankommer til den skotske by Inverness og går sin første tur på hovedgaden, får man indtryk af, at mange af byens indbyggere lever af myten om Loch Ness-uhyret. I næsten hvert eneste butiksvindue ser nab Nessie-plakater, kort over Loch Ness med oplysninger om hvor og hvornår hun sidst er blevet set, Nessie på postkort, "Videnskablige" tegninger af forskellige fortidsøgler som ligner beskrivelser af hende, søslanger af glas og porcellain, legetøjs-Nessier med sækkepibe og skottehue, bøger fulde af gruopvækkende anekdoter og videnskablige afhandlinger om denne berømte søslange, som hævdes at leve i dey mudrede vand langt nede under vandoverfladen i den ufatteligt dybe Loch Ness.
Zoologer der tror på Nessie's eksistens, mener, at en forhistorisk øglefamilie, såkaldte plesiosaurer, har overlevet i søens dyb hvor den i årtusinder levede af ål, laks og ørrede, som findes i store mængder i Loch Ness. Den først skrevne beretning om Nessie stammer fra år 565 og siden er Nessie set mange gange, dels som en skygge lige under vandoverfladen, dels som uforklarlige pukler i vandet.
Den 22. juli 1933 kom hun ligefrem op af vandet hvis man skal tro Mr. Spicer og hans kone, som kørte en tidig morgen langs den snoede vej mellem landsbyene Dores og Foyers. De så et kæmpemæssigt væsen lunte over vejen, som på dette sted går tæt ved søbredden. Væsenet havde en lang, slangeagtig hale og en stor klumpet krop og bevægede sig hurtigt ud af syne hen mod vandkanten.
Hun blev også set på nært hold d. 20. August 1952, da Mrs. Greta Finlay, som bor i Inverness, sad ved sin campingvogn på en parkeringsplads ved Torr Point. Hun hørte en plasken i vandet og så uhyret dukke op lige foran sig, så nær ved bredden at hun erklærede at hun "kunne have ramt Nessie med en sten". Hun havde imidlertid ikke åndsnærværelse til at kaste noget som helst efter Nessie, for hun stod rent faktisk lammet af rædsel til det enorme dyr forsvandt i det mørke vand.