Oversættelse

Hejsa.. er der mon ikke en som vil kigge disse sætninger for fejl??

Takker på forhånd!

Min oversættelse:

1)You should not spend all your money on film and plates.
2)My parents said that I might have a party while they were on holiday.
3)After the affair John wanted never to marry.
4)The director must send the rest of the worker home because of the strike.
5)If I had been able to find the address I would had written to you.
6)Mr. close would never speak with his neighbours
7)He has been allowed to sell his car.
8)The pupils will not be able to understand the problem if you do not help them.
9)My brother had always wanted to go to fishing alone, but had never might by our parents.
10)I have not be allowed to borrow the car, since I maked a dent in the mudguard.

Dansk version:

1)Du skulle ikke bruge alle dine penge på film og plader.
2)Mine forældre sagde, at jeg gerne måtte holde fest, mens de var på ferie.
3)Efter denne affære har John aldrige villet gifte sig,
4)Direktøren har måttet sende resten af arbejderne hjem på grund af strejken.
5)Hvis jeg havde kunnet finde adressen, ville jeg have skrevet til dig.
6)Mr. Close har aldrige villet snakke med sine naboer.
7)Han har måttet sælge sin bil.
8)Eleverne ville ikke kunne forstå problemet, hvis du ikke hjælper dem.
9)Min bror har altid villet gå ud at fiske alene, men har aldrige måttet for vores forældre.
10)Jeg har ikke måttet låne bilen, lige siden jeg lavede en bule i skærmen.