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27. februar 2006 af
sdj (Slettet)
Hej! Håber nogen vil rette de værste fejl i dette udrarg af min stil?
The boys grows up, and becomes good friends, though withouth knowing they are twíns. As they get older, their ways seperates for a while. mickey gets a unskilled job at a factory; Eddie gets an education,
and becomes the director for the factory, that he has inherited by his father.vMickey is getting jaloux and bitter, Eddie is getting helpfull and friendly.
their years of growth makes it possible for them to understand each other.When Mickey gets supecious about, that his wife, Linda, has an affair whith Eddie,the story speeds up and finds a tragic ending.
The boys grows up, and becomes good friends, though withouth knowing they are twíns. As they get older, their ways seperates for a while. mickey gets a unskilled job at a factory; Eddie gets an education,
and becomes the director for the factory, that he has inherited by his father.vMickey is getting jaloux and bitter, Eddie is getting helpfull and friendly.
their years of growth makes it possible for them to understand each other.When Mickey gets supecious about, that his wife, Linda, has an affair whith Eddie,the story speeds up and finds a tragic ending.
Svar #1
27. februar 2006 af Herter (Slettet)
The boys grow up, and become good friends, though without knowing they are twins. As they get older, their ways seperate for a while. Mickey gets a unskilled job at a factory; Eddie gets an education,
and becomes the director of the factory, which he has inherited from his father. Mickey is getting jealous and bitter, Eddie is getting helpfull and friendly.
Growing up together makes it possible for them to understand each other. When Mickey gets suspicious about, that his wife, Linda, has an affair with Eddie, the story speeds up and has a tragic ending.
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Ikke helt perfekt, men så skulle det værste være rettet :)
Der er nogle sætningsformuleringer der ikke er alt for gode, men pga tidsmangel kan jeg ikke lige rette det ligenu.. mon ikke en anden kan tage over?
and becomes the director of the factory, which he has inherited from his father. Mickey is getting jealous and bitter, Eddie is getting helpfull and friendly.
Growing up together makes it possible for them to understand each other. When Mickey gets suspicious about, that his wife, Linda, has an affair with Eddie, the story speeds up and has a tragic ending.
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Ikke helt perfekt, men så skulle det værste være rettet :)
Der er nogle sætningsformuleringer der ikke er alt for gode, men pga tidsmangel kan jeg ikke lige rette det ligenu.. mon ikke en anden kan tage over?
Svar #2
27. februar 2006 af sdj (Slettet)
Okay, men mange tak alligevel:p
Ikke andre der kan finde nogle fejl?
Ikke andre der kan finde nogle fejl?
Svar #6
27. februar 2006 af kager (Slettet)
hehe blood brothers :P
Det største problem er at sproget ikke er særligt flydende. Jeg ville anbefale dig at prøve at skrive det samme en gang til og se om det bliver bedre. Det er jo ikke mange linier.
en sætning som:
The boys grow up, and become good friends, though without knowing they are twins.
lyder ret mærkelig.
The boys grow up to be good friends not knowing they are twins.
ville jeg nok skrive
desuden skal du nok inkludere at eddie er den tvilling der bliver solgt ind i den rige familie hvorimod mickey bliver hos sin mor i det fattige arbejdermiljø.
Det største problem er at sproget ikke er særligt flydende. Jeg ville anbefale dig at prøve at skrive det samme en gang til og se om det bliver bedre. Det er jo ikke mange linier.
en sætning som:
The boys grow up, and become good friends, though without knowing they are twins.
lyder ret mærkelig.
The boys grow up to be good friends not knowing they are twins.
ville jeg nok skrive
desuden skal du nok inkludere at eddie er den tvilling der bliver solgt ind i den rige familie hvorimod mickey bliver hos sin mor i det fattige arbejdermiljø.
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