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25. april 2006 af
Wutz (Slettet)
Nogen der gider at rette i det her?
Kunne være dejligt :)
I think it’s because the teenagers are spoilt because of the their parents. It’s not like the old days, when the kids had to work for their own things. Today they get what they point at. And if they don’t have their way, they decide to do something drastic.
I know it’s a little bit overreacted, but it’s just to show you how it really is.
But why is 1.y doing this?
Jeanette: It’s to help the teenagers and their circle of acquaintances.We are planning to give a talk about all this on some chosen schools. And our final aim, is to help the teenagers who think of suicide, and learn their friends how they shall react if their friend is talking about suicide.
Kunne være dejligt :)
I think it’s because the teenagers are spoilt because of the their parents. It’s not like the old days, when the kids had to work for their own things. Today they get what they point at. And if they don’t have their way, they decide to do something drastic.
I know it’s a little bit overreacted, but it’s just to show you how it really is.
But why is 1.y doing this?
Jeanette: It’s to help the teenagers and their circle of acquaintances.We are planning to give a talk about all this on some chosen schools. And our final aim, is to help the teenagers who think of suicide, and learn their friends how they shall react if their friend is talking about suicide.
Svar #1
25. april 2006 af Nithelizius (Slettet)
hvis du skriver den danske tekst også bliver det lettere idet man lettere ved hvor du vil hen med det :) håber ikke jeg er til besvær ;)
Svar #2
25. april 2006 af Wutz (Slettet)
nej det er du ikke, for det forstår jeg godt, men jeg har ikke den danske. For det er bare noget jeg selv har fundet på. Hehe
Det er mest grammatikken og sådan noget :)
Det er mest grammatikken og sådan noget :)
Svar #3
25. april 2006 af Nithelizius (Slettet)
ok :)
jeg ville nok formulere nogle ting anderledes, men derved ændrer jeg lidt på det, så du kan bare se bort fra det hvis det er :)
I think it’s because the teenagers are so spoiled by their parents. It’s not like in the old days, when the kids had to work (to buy their own things)/(be able to get their own things). Today parents will just give their kids whatever they point at. And if they don’t get it their way, they decide to do something drastic.
I know it’s a little bit exaggerated, but it’s just to give you an idea of how it really is.
But why is 1.y doing this?
Jeanette: It’s to help the teenagers and their circle of acquaintances. We are planning to hold a speech about all this on selected schools. And our final aim, is to help the teenagers who are thinking about suicide, and teach their friends how to react if their friend is talking about suicide.
lidt mange rettelser, hvor langt de fleste er unødvendige, men håber du kan bruge det. held og lykke :)
jeg ville nok formulere nogle ting anderledes, men derved ændrer jeg lidt på det, så du kan bare se bort fra det hvis det er :)
I think it’s because the teenagers are so spoiled by their parents. It’s not like in the old days, when the kids had to work (to buy their own things)/(be able to get their own things). Today parents will just give their kids whatever they point at. And if they don’t get it their way, they decide to do something drastic.
I know it’s a little bit exaggerated, but it’s just to give you an idea of how it really is.
But why is 1.y doing this?
Jeanette: It’s to help the teenagers and their circle of acquaintances. We are planning to hold a speech about all this on selected schools. And our final aim, is to help the teenagers who are thinking about suicide, and teach their friends how to react if their friend is talking about suicide.
lidt mange rettelser, hvor langt de fleste er unødvendige, men håber du kan bruge det. held og lykke :)
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