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any mistakes?
03. maj 2006 af
figaro8 (Slettet)
In whose name
This text tells about terrorism, and especially the question “ How can some people do this? And why?”. By one of the biggest terrorist attacks, “the attacks on world trade center, in 2001”, it is very difficult, to point on a reason, why these men were doing this attack. It couldn’t be something with religion after all, because more than 6000 people from over 60 countries were murdered, and I am sure about, that they didn’t had the same religion everybody. They see themselves as heroes, even through their religion didn’t allow them to be that, after a action like that. By the many victims, a big number of them were children, and it most have been terrible when they just were sitting in the plain, diffently with their families, and waiting for flying into the buildings, knowing about, that the pilots are totally brainwashed. –As I said more than 6000 people died because of the action, and most of people around the world were in chock. But some place people were dancing and enjoying the taken action, and they tribute the terrorist as heroes, because of their initiative. And these people I simply just can’t understand, how can people be so immorally and careless over for a tragedy like this, that’s just my opinion about that.
This text tells about terrorism, and especially the question “ How can some people do this? And why?”. By one of the biggest terrorist attacks, “the attacks on world trade center, in 2001”, it is very difficult, to point on a reason, why these men were doing this attack. It couldn’t be something with religion after all, because more than 6000 people from over 60 countries were murdered, and I am sure about, that they didn’t had the same religion everybody. They see themselves as heroes, even through their religion didn’t allow them to be that, after a action like that. By the many victims, a big number of them were children, and it most have been terrible when they just were sitting in the plain, diffently with their families, and waiting for flying into the buildings, knowing about, that the pilots are totally brainwashed. –As I said more than 6000 people died because of the action, and most of people around the world were in chock. But some place people were dancing and enjoying the taken action, and they tribute the terrorist as heroes, because of their initiative. And these people I simply just can’t understand, how can people be so immorally and careless over for a tragedy like this, that’s just my opinion about that.
Svar #1
03. maj 2006 af figaro8 (Slettet)
den er kort, og jeg tror ikke der er så mange betydelig fejl i, men er der ikke lige en som bare hurtigt kunne skimte den?
Svar #2
04. maj 2006 af Katrine (Slettet)
This text is about terrorism and especially the questions of how and why some people do this. At one of the largest terrorist attacks, the attack on the World Trade Cebter in 2001, it is very difficult to point to a reason for why these men did these attacks. It could not be something religious after all, since more than 6,000 people from over 60 countries were murdered, and I am sure that they did not all practise the same religion. The terrorists see themselves as heroes even though their religion do not allow them to be that after an action like that (Har ingen anelse om, hvad du mener med det her. Jeg vil foretrække en komplet omskrivning, så man ved, hvad du hentyder til med "that")
A large number of the victims were children... Her går det virkeligt galt. Jeg forstår ikke, hvad du skriver.. Er det en oversættelse, eller frit fra leveren? Du må gerne lige skrive det på dansk, så jeg har mulighed for at rette det sidste.
A large number of the victims were children... Her går det virkeligt galt. Jeg forstår ikke, hvad du skriver.. Er det en oversættelse, eller frit fra leveren? Du må gerne lige skrive det på dansk, så jeg har mulighed for at rette det sidste.
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