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Hjælp, tak :-)

27. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Er der ikke en der vil være sød at rette min tekst? (Om Billy Elliot)
B.la grammatiken, og endelserne. Og om det jeg har skrevet er rigtigt?
Ikke inkl. komma'er. (Det behøver du ikke)
- Tak.

1) How do Billys life change, when he begins to dance? How does it affect him and his dream in the future?

Svar:
When Billy started to dance it effect him in a kind of way, because, if he had chosen to be a boxer(after his fathers opinion), then his life had absolutly been diffrent, than it is now, when he dance.
If he had been home with his fater and rest of the family, his life would be a kind boring.
When he chose to ba a ballet dancer he had a chance to see and feel the world.

- Håber virkelig der er en der har lyst til at se nærmere på det:-)
Takker.

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Svar #1
27. maj 2006 af DMD (Slettet)

When Billy started to dance it had an effect on him, because, if he had chosen to be a boxer (which his father would have preffered), then his life would have been much different compared to where he is now.
If he had staid home with his father and rest of the family, I can imagine that his live would have been boring.
As a ballet dancer he has a chance to see and feel the world.

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Svar #2
27. maj 2006 af DMD (Slettet)

Meget hurtigt gennemgået.. Nogle sætninger kunne omformuleres..

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Svar #3
27. maj 2006 af La Gioconda (Slettet)

Rettelse
*...in a kind of way...
--> ...in a way..

diffrent, staves different

*...and rest of the family...
--> ...and the rest of the family...

*...his life would be a kind borring...
--> ...his life would be kind of borring...

Håber det hjælper lidt ;)

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Svar #4
27. maj 2006 af DMD (Slettet)

As a ballet dancer he has an opportunity to see and feel the world.

Svar #5
27. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

Woow, tak du:-)

Svar #6
27. maj 2006 af Lisa02 (Slettet)

- Tak, til allesammen :-)
Herligt at man kan modtage hjælp fra nogle søde mennesker :-)

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Svar #7
27. maj 2006 af DMD (Slettet)

Bare i orden..

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Svar #8
27. maj 2006 af La Gioconda (Slettet)

;)

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