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Jeg har rettet lidt i det første - er ikke sikker på alle rettelserne.


Yes, but the first fairytale is named lazy jack, and before we will start telling you about /it’s/ (its) structure, we will give you (a) little summary of the fairytale. First of all /It/ (it) starts very traditionally with “once upon a time”. And it’s all about a boy named jack, /whose live together with his mom/ (who lives with his mom), and they are very poor. And /That’s/ (that's) why the mother work very hard by spinning, to get money for surviving. But jack /don’t’/ (doesn't) /wants/ (want) to work, instead he is just relaxing and do(ing) nothing. But then suddenly the mother /told/ (tells) him to find a job/./ (,) /A/(a)nd so he does, he tries allot of different jobs, but every time, he either drop(s) or /spoil/ (spends??) his pay on his way home/./ /W/(w)hich is very bad. But then at last, he gets a job as a cattle – keeper, and his pay by doing this, is a donkey.

Allot= a lot

tak.. for responsen;) er ikke helt enig i alle fejlene, men det er jo heller ikke meningen;)

Har rettet den og omskrevet lidt, fordi det i mine ører kunne lyde lidt bedre nogen steder

The first fairytale is named Lazy Jack. Before we will tell you about the structure, we will give you little summary of the fairytale. First of all it starts very traditionally with “once upon a time”. The story is about a boy named Jack, who lives together with his mom. They are very poor. That’s why the mother works very hard spinning, to get money to survive. But Jack doesn’t want to work; instead he is just relaxing and does nothing. Then suddenly the mother tells him to find a job: and so he does. He tries a lot of different jobs, but every time he either drops or spoils his pay on his way home, which is very bad. But then at last, he gets a job, as a cattle keeper. His pay for doing this is a donkey. Previously the mom told Jack to carry his pay on his shoulders, because that’s the most save way to ensure that he doesn’t drop it on the way home. So as Jack walks his way home, he carries the donkey on his shoulders. On the way home there is a house. In this house live a rich man and his daughter who is deaf and dumb, but yet beautiful. The doctors told her, that she would never be healthy, but as she saw Jack through the window, she began to laugh and thereby she was recovered. Be course of this, the father, as thanks, let Jack marriage his daughter. Jack and his mother became very rich, and lived in great happiness.

Håber du kan bruge det :D

jo tak.. men husk at grunden til at det til tider er lidt mærkeligt skrevet, er fordi det er til mundtlig fremstilling

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Uanset om det er mundtlig fremstilling eller ej, vil din lærer nok blive glad, hvis det er korrekt ;)

ja det er så helt relevant hehe..