oversættelse

det bedste ville være, hvis du selv prøvede at oversætte først, så tror jeg også, folk er mere villige til at hjælpe :)

Det hele køret rundt i min hovedet jeg havde ingen anelse om, hvad jeg skulle stille op. Men det hele var over nu. Jeg tørret min tår af. Dave var død nu. Vi fik aldrig tid til at gå ud sammen, der var så mange ting der kørte rundt i mine tanker. Det var min første gang, jeg var ud for det her spil, jeg vil aldrig mere gøre det her. Det sidste ting jeg kan huske var den hvid loft. Jeg kan ikke huske i hvor lang tid jeg var væk. Det første ting jeg så var en hvide loft,

everything was cirkling around in my head, I didn't had any suspicion about, what I was supposed to do. I wiped my eyes. Dave was dead now. We never had time for dating, because I had so many thoughts. It was the first time, something like this happend to. I will never do this again. The last thing I remembered was the white loft. I don't remember how long time I was gone. The first thing I saw was the white loft.

nu kan du fortsætte selv:)

eller skal jeg være flink:)


efter jeg havde været fra min selv.
Jeg gik op fra Jose’s seng som Jose også var med i min klub. Jeg gik i hans stue, og så ham siddende ned på sofaen i . Han så op på mig, og spurgte om jeg havde fået det bedre? Og så kom jeg i tanke om, hvad der var sket. Jeg blive så forvirret at jeg ikke kunne huske hvad Jose sagde til mig. Jose så lidt skørt på mig, men han forstod det godt. Han vidste godt hvad jeg havde været ude for. Men han så helt roligt ud, og det kunne jeg ikke forstå.
Efter en time blev jeg selv lidt roligere. Men jeg var stadig lidt bekymret, for hvordan skulle jeg fortælle det til min familie og min kæreste. Og så kom jeg i tanke om at hvordan Daves familie og kæreste mon har det lig nu. det var meget svært at glemme det der var sket. Jeg tog hjem med et skidt humør, og var bange og havde det dårligt, jeg var bange for at min kæreste skulle finde ud af det.

After this, I have not been me!?
I went up from jose's bed, and jose is also a member of my club (?)I walked in to his room, and saw him sit in the sofa. he looked at me, and afterwards he asked if I was better? from this moment I realized what happend. I was so confused, that I not even listen to what he told me. he looked at me, as I was crazy, but I am sure he understand it. He knew what has happend to me, but he seems to be calm, which I couldn't understand. after an hour I was calm my self. but I was still a bit worried, because how should I tell all this to my famliy, and mig girlfriend. then I was thinking, how dave's family and girlfriend should be. It was difficult to forget the realities. I went home with a bad feeling, and I felt bad, and I was scary, about if my girlfriend would figure it all out.

der er sikkert et par fejl, men det er jo os sent!