Oversættelse - Butikstyveri

Vil høre, om der er et engelsk-geni, der gider at tjekke den her oversættelse i gennem?

På dansk:
"Er det fru Smith? Goddag. Det er Johnson fra Jones' Supermarked. Jeg vil gerne bede Dem komme herned med det samme til en lille snak om Deres søn og en af hans venner".
"Hvorfor?".
"Jo, fru Smith, jeg er ked af at måtte fortælle, at de to drenge har taget nogle ting, som de ikke kunne betale for!".
"Hvad siger De! Har de stjålet noget?".
"Ja, det er jeg bange for, at de har. De to drenges lommer var fyldt med Bounty'er, som de havde taget fra hylderne. I Deres søns skoletaske fandt vi to lommeknive og noget legetøh, og i kammeratens taske var der en del tegneserier og flere æsker chokolade. For øvrigt havde de også fyldt munden med karameller, da vi snuppede dem".
"Det er uden tvivl en misforståelse. Jeg tror ikke, at det har været børnenes hensigt at stjæle. De er ikke tyveknægte!".
"Naturligvis ikke, frue, men De må forstå, at vore kunder må betale for de varer, de tager, og de to børn havde faktisk ikke mange penge at betale med".

Engelsk:
"Is this Mrs Smith? Hello. This is Johnson from Jones' Supermarket. I would like for you to come down here right away to a little talk about your son and one of his friends".
"Why?".
"Well, Mrs Smith, I am sorry to tell you that the two boys have taken stolen some things, that they couldn't pay for!".
What are you saying? Have they stolen something?".
"Yes, I'm afraid so. The two boys' pockets were fillede with Bounty's, that they had taken from the shelves. In your son's school bag we found two pocket knifesand some toys, and in the friend's bag we there were a lot of comic books and several
boxes of chocolate. By the way they had also filled their mouths with toffees, when we nabbed them".
"It is without a doubt a misunderstanding. I don't think the that it has been the childrens intention to steal. They are not thiefs!".
"Of course not, Mrs Smith, but you have to understand, that our customers have to pay for the articles, they take, and the two children didn't have much money to pay with".

Tak! :-)