oversættelse Irland

Håber der er en der gider at se min oversættelse lidt igennem. Synes bare slet ikke at den blev god.. På forhånd tak.

Dansk:
Den irske republik blev selvstændig i 1922, men den nordlige del af øen blev ikke en del af den ny stat. I de seks nordøstlige grevskaber var der flertal for at forblive en del af Det forenede Kongerige, fordi størsteparten af befolkningen var protestanter. De
fleste irere er katolikker, men i Nordirland er mange skotske og engelske protestanter indvandret i tidens løb. De ønskede ikke at være et mindretal i et forenet Irland, der var domineret af den katolske kirke.
Siden 1922 har Nordirland varet styret af den protestantiske befolkning. Religionen er dog ikke det eneste, der skiller de to grupper. Det er også vigtige sociale og økonomiske forskelle; der er flere fattige blandt katolikkerne, og også flere arbejdsløse.
I Londonderry i august 1969 begyndte en større gruppe katolske unge at kaste sten mod en protestantisk demonstration; dette var indledningen til tre dages uroligheder, som kaldes slaget om Bogside. Også i andre byer havde der været sammenstød, og den engelske regering var nødt til at sætte den britiske hær ind for at undgår en borgerkrig. I begyndelsen blev den britiske hær betragtet som katolikkernes beskyttere, men efter en kortere periode mente mange, at den snarere holdt protestanterne ved magten. Det gav IRA mulighed for at rekruttere flere tilhængere, og efter oprettelsen af Det provisoriske IRA, der gik ind for brug af vold, kom der snart mange blodige sammenstød. Et af de blodigste var “Bloody Sunday” i 1972, hvor engelske soldater dræbte 13 katolikker.
Efter en større debat besluttede den engelske regering at suspendere det nordiske parlament og indføre direkte styre fra London. Situationen har ikke ændret sig meget siden 1972. Det har vist sig umuligt at finde en løsning, som alle parter villet acceptere.


Engelsk:
The Irish Republic became independent in 1922, but the northern part of the island did not became a part of the new state. In the six north-easterly counties where there a majority for remaining a part of The United Kingdom, because the major part of the population were protestants. Most of the Irish is Catholics, but in the northern part of Ireland are there a lot of Scots and English protestants who had immigrated in the time there have past. Theirs wish was not to be a minority in the United Ireland, which were dominated of the Catholics church.
Since 1922 has the northern part of Ireland been ruled by the protestants people. The religion is however not the only thing there separates the to groups. There are also important social and economy differences; There are more pour people among the Catholics, and there are also a bigger number of unemployed.
In Londonderry at august 1969 started a larger group of young Catholics to throw stones against a protestants demonstration; this were the opening to tree days of disturbances, known as the battle of Bogside. Also in other cities has there been collisions, and the English government had to place British army in Ireland to avoid a civil war.
At the beginning the British army were consider as the Catholics protector, but after a short period many thought, that it rather kept the Protestants at the power. This gave the IRA the possibility to recruit more believers, and after the opening of The Provisional IRA, there believed in use of violence, came there soon a lots of bloody collision. One of the most bloody were “Bloody Sunday” in 1972, were the English soldiers killed 13 Catholics.
After a big debate decided the English government to suspend the Nordic parliaments and introduce a directly government from London. The situation has not chanced a lot since 1972. It has been showed that it is impossible to find a solution, that all parts will accept.